ToddHW wrote: ↑May 18th, 2021, 9:01 amAnd here is Act 5. Ties it all together. Enjoy.
enjoy I did
What a cool and turbulent finale. Another brilliant performance and editing.
I would only suggest one correction at this spot:
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at 4:55: maybe in this speech, we should
put the persons spoken to at the beginning of each sentence instead of after it, otherwise it's a bit confusing who should do what:
"
Villers, to Letty: You go and put off your conquering dress, and get all your awkward airs ready—
to Hardy: And you practise a few groans —
to Mrs Racket: And you—if possible—an air of gravity.
I'll answer for the plot."
the rest, perfect as always
Sonia