OPEN[PLAY]The Belle's Stratagem by Hannah Cowley - thw

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Marya999
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Post by Marya999 » December 19th, 2020, 3:59 pm

Thanks for the encouragement, Sonia! This was fun :)

I did a few versions of the omnes lines and wasn't sure which would sound best with the other characters- so I just left them in.

Villers Act 5:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bellesstratagem_villers_5_128kb.mp3

Marya


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Post by Kitty » December 20th, 2020, 5:51 am

Marya999 wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 3:59 pm
Thanks for the encouragement, Sonia! This was fun :)
I did a few versions of the omnes lines and wasn't sure which would sound best with the other characters- so I just left them in.
thank you Marya :) Villers is still excellent till the end. :thumbs: And yes, Todd can choose the one he likes best if you cannot decide ;)

I have only two small notes, actually concerning the Omnes lines:

> from 3:05-3:11: "hahaha" - so cool that you didn't forget the ALL lines, but here actually Villers is not on stage when the others laugh, so this part could be cut out (sorry about that)

> from 3:54-4:01: "joy joy joy" - here Villers is rightly included, as he has appeared on stage by that time. Could you just place it to time stamp 3:30 (where there already is one example of this line) ? It will make it easier for our editor if all the quotes are in the correct order.

Also careful sometimes when stage directions are inside your sentences, there you should also leave more space for Todd to copy&paste. Very often you did it, but sometimes you forgot. No need to change it this time, I just mention it for further plays.

thanks

Sonia

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Post by Marya999 » December 20th, 2020, 3:54 pm

Villers 5 for spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bellesstratagem_villers_5_128kb.m 4:00

Thanks Sonia- I will remember that for the future


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Post by Kitty » December 21st, 2020, 2:44 am

Marya999 wrote:
December 20th, 2020, 3:54 pm
Villers 5 for spot PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/bellesstratagem_villers_5_128kb.m 4:00
thank you, all PL ok now :)

Sonia

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