OPEN[PLAY]Miss Buzby's Boarders by Tubbs - thw

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Post by ToddHW » October 5th, 2020, 10:59 am

Okay, not full anymore.

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Post by adr6090 » October 6th, 2020, 4:50 pm

Hello Todd,
May I please read the lines for Florinda; sections 1, 2 & 3?
April

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Post by ToddHW » October 6th, 2020, 6:54 pm

Thank you. Full again.

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Post by mightyfelix » October 6th, 2020, 9:42 pm

ToddHW wrote:
October 3rd, 2020, 10:01 am
Mr Smith, that man of mystery, awaits PL in the MW.

Thanks, Todd
Terribly mysterious! :mrgreen:

I heard a couple of slight changes, mostly minor enough to ignore most likely, but I mention them in case you want to revisit and decide for yourself. :)

Act 1:

OPTIONAL 0:26 Word switch, doesn't change the meaning much. Text reads (p. 7): "...did you speak to me..." I hear "...you did speak to me..."

Act 3:

OPTIONAL 2:38 Word change, same meaning, basically. Text reads (p. 46): "You must tell me where Miss Wendale went..." I hear: "You must let me know where Miss Wendale went..."
5:57 Added word. Text reads (p. 49): "Madam! Do you mean--?" I hear: "Madam! What do you mean--?"

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Post by adr6090 » October 7th, 2020, 3:57 pm

Hey Todd,
I am ready now to read Florinda's lines. I only see her lines in section 3 on page 16. Well heck, why do you think that is?
I will read those & post them.
April

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Post by adr6090 » October 7th, 2020, 4:02 pm

Nope I do not see Florinda's lines on pg 16 afterall. I will look and look and look as I know they MUST be there.....
April

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Post by adr6090 » October 7th, 2020, 4:05 pm

Got it!! Now will record Florinda. :clap:
April

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Post by ToddHW » October 9th, 2020, 5:53 am

Oh, Yeah. I'm supposed to PL these. On it....

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Post by ToddHW » October 9th, 2020, 6:27 am

Stage Directions 1 and 2 both perfect. PL OK.

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Post by ToddHW » October 9th, 2020, 6:35 am

mightyfelix wrote:
October 6th, 2020, 9:42 pm
ToddHW wrote:
October 3rd, 2020, 10:01 am
Mr Smith, that man of mystery, awaits PL in the MW.

Thanks, Todd
Terribly mysterious! :mrgreen:

I heard a couple of slight changes, mostly minor enough to ignore most likely, but I mention them in case you want to revisit and decide for yourself. :)

Act 1:

OPTIONAL 0:26 Word switch, doesn't change the meaning much. Text reads (p. 7): "...did you speak to me..." I hear "...you did speak to me..."

Act 3:

OPTIONAL 2:38 Word change, same meaning, basically. Text reads (p. 46): "You must tell me where Miss Wendale went..." I hear: "You must let me know where Miss Wendale went..."
5:57 Added word. Text reads (p. 49): "Madam! Do you mean--?" I hear: "Madam! What do you mean--?"
Fixed Act 1 as suggested.

For Act 2, did not do first optional fix, but did do second fix.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by mightyfelix » October 9th, 2020, 6:54 am

Both PL ok now. Thanks, you man of mystery, you. :wink:

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Post by Salvationist » October 9th, 2020, 2:40 pm

Here's Act 3 for Jimmie:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/missbuzbysboarders_jimmiespangler_3_128kb.mp3 1:22

That certainly feels like a more satisfying conclusion to this character's story. :)
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Post by adr6090 » October 11th, 2020, 11:45 am

Hey Todd,
I am giving my Florinda sections, 1,2 & 3, back. Reading roles in plays just does not clique for me.
I am sorry for any angst I may have caused by doing such.
April

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