COMPLETE[PLAY]Civilian Clothes by Buchanan - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » October 5th, 2020, 6:09 am

Let me put down my white cane and - ah, there it is. I wasn't looking for it within my lines, but for a new one.

Fixed and uploaded.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » October 5th, 2020, 6:39 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑October 5th, 2020, 6:09 amah, there it is. I wasn't looking for it within my lines, but for a new one.

sorry I wasn't precise enough in my original notes

But yes, both missed lines perfectly inserted and all PL ok now

thanks

Sonia

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » October 14th, 2020, 12:26 pm

Here is Act 1 for Florence:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_1_128k.mp3

She had quite a few lines this act!

Post by **ToddHW** » October 14th, 2020, 12:56 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » October 15th, 2020, 6:34 am

jennlea wrote: ↑October 14th, 2020, 12:26 pmHere is Act 1 for Florence:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_1_128k.mp3
She had quite a few lines this act!

well, she is the main female character of the play

but you played her perfectly, a bit coquettish to the men that woo her, rebellious with her parents and quite nasty and looking down on her husband. Wow she is a snob there

! Doesn't really go with her affinity for being slapped around by men

Now I'm looking forward how she will change and fight for Sam when he is in MY claws (or so she thinks)

Perfect first act, Jenn. Absolutely PL ok.

Thank you

Sonia

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » October 15th, 2020, 7:00 am

Kitty wrote: ↑October 15th, 2020, 6:34 am well, she is the main female character of the play but you played her perfectly, a bit coquettish to the men that woo her, rebellious with her parents and quite nasty and looking down on her husband. Wow she is a snob there ! Doesn't really go with her affinity for being slapped around by men

Now I'm looking forward how she will change and fight for Sam when he is in MY claws (or so she thinks)

Perfect first act, Jenn. Absolutely PL ok.

Thank you! She really was quite the snob with Sam! Looking forward to recording the rest of her

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » October 17th, 2020, 6:40 am

Here are Acts 2 and 3 for Florence:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_2_128k.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_3_128k.mp3

For the ad-lib section in Act 2 I gave Todd a couple of lines to use as he sees fit.

Post by **ToddHW** » October 17th, 2020, 8:08 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » October 19th, 2020, 4:30 am

jennlea wrote: ↑October 17th, 2020, 6:40 amHere are Acts 2 and 3 for Florence:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_2_128k.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_3_128k.mp3
For the ad-lib section in Act 2 I gave Todd a couple of lines to use as he sees fit.

sorry for the late feedback, but this weekend has been quite busy

but I'm working off my backlog PL jobs now slowly.

Excellent job again, Jenn...Florence sounds like a petty spoilt child throughout the play (I admit, she's not a character I really like, a bit too bitchy for my taste, but that's not your fault, I blame the author

you played her excellently.)

Act 2 is already PL ok.

One missed quote in Act 3 though:

> at about 10:31: (p. 129) please insert: "Will you send a lady's maid, please ? Captain McGinnis's room No. 369. Mrs McGinnis speaking."

thanks ! That's a huge part finished.

Sonia

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » October 19th, 2020, 9:33 am

Kitty wrote: ↑October 19th, 2020, 4:30 am sorry for the late feedback, but this weekend has been quite busy but I'm working off my backlog PL jobs now slowly.

Excellent job again, Jenn...Florence sounds like a petty spoilt child throughout the play (I admit, she's not a character I really like, a bit too bitchy for my taste, but that's not your fault, I blame the author you played her excellently.)

Act 2 is already PL ok.

One missed quote in Act 3 though:

> at about 10:31: (p. 129) please insert: "Will you send a lady's maid, please ? Captain McGinnis's room No. 369. Mrs McGinnis speaking."

thanks ! That's a huge part finished.

Sonia

Didn't think you were late with the feedback at all! I quite enjoyed playing her...I wonder what that says about me

Here is Act 3 with the missing line:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_3_128k.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » October 19th, 2020, 11:41 am

jennlea wrote: ↑October 19th, 2020, 9:33 amDidn't think you were late with the feedback at all! I quite enjoyed playing her...I wonder what that says about me

oh I also like to play out characters I would be averse to in real life, so it does not necessarily say anything bad about you

thank you for the added line, now all PL ok. Great job !

Sonia

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » October 29th, 2020, 3:50 am

Lanham act 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_mrlanham_2.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » October 29th, 2020, 7:05 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » October 29th, 2020, 7:17 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑October 29th, 2020, 3:50 amLanham act 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_mrlanham_2.mp3

thank you, Alan, Mr Lanham stayed brilliantly in character.

I really have a fondness for the old man

wonderfully portrayed.

There are a few group lines missing however. I picked only those where I think Lanham would be included or on stage:

> at about 2:09: could you insert the ALL AD LIB. lines on top of p. 75 please, so Todd can throw you into the mix as well ? The lines starting with "pleasant day... [till] I'm a Bolshevik myself."

> at about 2:24: (p. 78) here are also some OTHERS lines that you missed:
> "Hear—hear—"
> "Sh—please."
> "Sh—"
> "Sh !"
> "Go on, Mr. Hart !"

> at about 3:50: (p. 99) missed line: "Gone ?" (spoken with Mrs Lanham)

thanks

Sonia

benderca · Post by **benderca** » October 29th, 2020, 11:06 am

Could I please get an extension on this project? Life has gotten in the way of my real passion, namely Librivox.