FULL[PLAY]Civilian Clothes by Buchanan - thw

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Post by ToddHW » October 5th, 2020, 6:09 am

Let me put down my white cane and - ah, there it is. I wasn't looking for it within my lines, but for a new one.

Fixed and uploaded.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » October 5th, 2020, 6:39 am

ToddHW wrote:
October 5th, 2020, 6:09 am
ah, there it is. I wasn't looking for it within my lines, but for a new one.
sorry I wasn't precise enough in my original notes :oops:

But yes, both missed lines perfectly inserted and all PL ok now :) thanks

Sonia

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Post by jennlea » October 14th, 2020, 12:26 pm

Here is Act 1 for Florence:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_1_128k.mp3

She had quite a few lines this act!
-Jenn B.


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Post by Kitty » October 15th, 2020, 6:34 am

jennlea wrote:
October 14th, 2020, 12:26 pm
Here is Act 1 for Florence:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_1_128k.mp3
She had quite a few lines this act!
well, she is the main female character of the play ;) but you played her perfectly, a bit coquettish to the men that woo her, rebellious with her parents and quite nasty and looking down on her husband. Wow she is a snob there :shock: ! Doesn't really go with her affinity for being slapped around by men :lol:

Now I'm looking forward how she will change and fight for Sam when he is in MY claws (or so she thinks) :mrgreen:

Perfect first act, Jenn. Absolutely PL ok.

Thank you

Sonia

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Post by jennlea » October 15th, 2020, 7:00 am

Kitty wrote:
October 15th, 2020, 6:34 am
well, she is the main female character of the play ;) but you played her perfectly, a bit coquettish to the men that woo her, rebellious with her parents and quite nasty and looking down on her husband. Wow she is a snob there :shock: ! Doesn't really go with her affinity for being slapped around by men :lol:

Now I'm looking forward how she will change and fight for Sam when he is in MY claws (or so she thinks) :mrgreen:

Perfect first act, Jenn. Absolutely PL ok.
Thank you! She really was quite the snob with Sam! Looking forward to recording the rest of her :)
-Jenn B.

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Post by jennlea » October 17th, 2020, 6:40 am

Here are Acts 2 and 3 for Florence:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_2_128k.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_3_128k.mp3

For the ad-lib section in Act 2 I gave Todd a couple of lines to use as he sees fit.
-Jenn B.


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Post by Kitty » October 19th, 2020, 4:30 am

jennlea wrote:
October 17th, 2020, 6:40 am
Here are Acts 2 and 3 for Florence:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_2_128k.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_3_128k.mp3
For the ad-lib section in Act 2 I gave Todd a couple of lines to use as he sees fit.
sorry for the late feedback, but this weekend has been quite busy :? but I'm working off my backlog PL jobs now slowly. :lol:

Excellent job again, Jenn...Florence sounds like a petty spoilt child throughout the play (I admit, she's not a character I really like, a bit too bitchy for my taste, but that's not your fault, I blame the author :lol: you played her excellently.)

Act 2 is already PL ok.

One missed quote in Act 3 though:

> at about 10:31: (p. 129) please insert: "Will you send a lady's maid, please ? Captain McGinnis's room No. 369. Mrs McGinnis speaking."

thanks ! That's a huge part finished.

Sonia

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Post by jennlea » October 19th, 2020, 9:33 am

Kitty wrote:
October 19th, 2020, 4:30 am
sorry for the late feedback, but this weekend has been quite busy :? but I'm working off my backlog PL jobs now slowly. :lol:

Excellent job again, Jenn...Florence sounds like a petty spoilt child throughout the play (I admit, she's not a character I really like, a bit too bitchy for my taste, but that's not your fault, I blame the author :lol: you played her excellently.)

Act 2 is already PL ok.

One missed quote in Act 3 though:

> at about 10:31: (p. 129) please insert: "Will you send a lady's maid, please ? Captain McGinnis's room No. 369. Mrs McGinnis speaking."

thanks ! That's a huge part finished.

Sonia
Didn't think you were late with the feedback at all! I quite enjoyed playing her...I wonder what that says about me :lol:

Here is Act 3 with the missing line:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/civilianclothes_florence_3_128k.mp3
-Jenn B.

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Post by Kitty » October 19th, 2020, 11:41 am

jennlea wrote:
October 19th, 2020, 9:33 am
Didn't think you were late with the feedback at all! I quite enjoyed playing her...I wonder what that says about me :lol:
oh I also like to play out characters I would be averse to in real life, so it does not necessarily say anything bad about you :mrgreen:

thank you for the added line, now all PL ok. Great job !

Sonia

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