Thank you so much! Great job with these lines, you are a natural!czandra wrote: ↑February 19th, 2021, 7:38 amI went out on a limb here, and actually sang the Caravan song in a sort of stentorian voice! Didn't attempt the elves' dirge, though - too solemn. Will happily re-record if it's too much.
0:03 I'd prefer the voice credit to say "Second courtier," instead of "Another Courtier." I realize that that it how it's written in the script, but I've made some slight changes, just because this script is so very inconsistent. When in doubt, always match what's in the MW.
0:21 At the top of page 239, there is a line that is simply labeled "Courtier," without specifying which one. (See what I mean about inconsistencies? ) I think it makes most sense for the second courtier to speak this line. Will you add it please?
0:26 I listened to this song, even though I knew I wouldn't be able to use it. And I so wish I could! I love it! But, I do need it to be spoken, as I said. And yes, layering voices can be a real challenge, but it's worth it! It's time-consuming, but there is a way to match the tempos of each voice to make them more or less line up.
The rest is fantastic! I especially love what you did with the dirge at the end.