COMPLETE[Play]Touch and Go by D. H. Lawrence - thw

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OooThatsNifty
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Here's Gerald, Act 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/touchandgo_gerald_3_128kb.mp3
Time: 20:36

Thanks again - let me know if anything needs an edit!
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wib66
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OooThatsNifty wrote: May 9th, 2021, 7:01 pm Here's Gerald, Act 3:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/touchandgo_gerald_3_128kb.mp3
Time: 20:36

Thanks again - let me know if anything needs an edit!
Thank you will do
Michele
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Gerald all three acts are PL OK thanks
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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If any one is able to PL act 1 I would be very grateful.
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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I'm on it! I might not be able to until tomorrow though.
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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Scarbo wrote: July 19th, 2021, 5:05 pm I'm on it! I might not be able to until tomorrow though.
Not a problem at just when you have the time will probably get the other two acts up this week but no rush thanks
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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Act I sounds great! I have a few notes:

- At 0:55, the "-thi" of "Sethi" is cut off.
- At 6:16, after "and he goeth," there's a line by a Voice ("Ay—an' what about it? Tha's got a behind o' thy own, hasn't yer?") that was left out. It's in the same paragraph as Willie's dialogue in the PG text, so it could have easily been missed out and not recorded in the original file, but I wanted to mention it since Willie's continued dialogue references it.
- This might not really matter, but at 14:00, "ANABEL (after a pause)" is missing.
- At 19:50, "I feel as if I should cry," it sounds like the C in "cry" is missing, but maybe that's in the original file. If it is, feel free to disregard this note.
- At 22:12, "from Yorkshire," it sounds as if the "-re" in "Yorkshire" has been cut off. But again, that could be in the original file.
- At 30:28, the end of the second "almost to madness" sounds a little cut off.
- At 35:14, "That's them, I suppose," the "-se" of "suppose" is cut off.
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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Scarbo wrote: July 20th, 2021, 5:45 pm Act I sounds great! I have a few notes:

- At 0:55, the "-thi" of "Sethi" is cut off. this has been corrected
- At 6:16, after "and he goeth," there's a line by a Voice ("Ay—an' what about it? Tha's got a behind o' thy own, hasn't yer?") that was left out. It's in the same paragraph as Willie's dialogue in the PG text, so it could have easily been missed out and not recorded in the original file, but I wanted to mention it since Willie's continued dialogue references it.I have PM'd the reader to see if she can record it for me.
- This might not really matter, but at 14:00, "ANABEL (after a pause)" is missing.not worried about this one
- At 19:50, "I feel as if I should cry," it sounds like the C in "cry" is missing, but maybe that's in the original file. If it is, feel free to disregard this note.this was in the original file so will leave it
- At 22:12, "from Yorkshire," it sounds as if the "-re" in "Yorkshire" has been cut off. But again, that could be in the original file.this has been corrected
- At 30:28, the end of the second "almost to madness" sounds a little cut off.this has been corrected
- At 35:14, "That's them, I suppose," the "-se" of "suppose" is cut off.this has been corrected
Hi and thanks for the PL. I have realised it is me for most of the cut offs with the way in which I edit. I have posted above where I am up to so far. I will wait to see if the missing line can be recorded thanks
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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Michele
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Here is the cast list

Narrator: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14297">Scarbo</a><br>
Gerald: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14540">Andrew Gaunce</a><br>
Voice 1: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15016">Kathi M. Walsheck</a><br>
Mrs Barlow: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14467">Diane Castillo</a><br>
Oliver Turton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/8677">KHand</a><br>
Mr Barlow: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14426">Andrew James</a><br>
Job Arthur: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7170">Alan Mapstone</a><br>
Winifred: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14424">Shreya Sethi</a><br>
Anabel: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/13140">Jenn Broda</a><br>
Willie Houghton: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/12980">Wayne Cooke</a><br>
Eva: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/14476">Lily</a><br>
William the Butler and Collier: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/10542">David Purdy</a><br>
Clerks and Voice: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/15239">Zach Hoyt</a><br>
Breffitt and Voice: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7079">Chuck Williamson</a><br>
Voices: <a href="https://librivox.org/reader/7026">Michele Eaton</a><br>
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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There are just two things I wanted to mention about the edited Act 1, but they're minor, so you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 22:17, "Yorkshire" still sounds a little cut off, but it might have sounded that way in the original.
- At 30:31, the first "Almost to madness" is repeated so that there are three total "Almost to madness"-es.

On to Act 2!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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There are just two things I wanted to mention about the edited Act 1, but they're minor, so you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 22:17, "Yorkshire" still sounds a little cut off, but it might have sounded that way in the original. This is how it is in the original

- At 30:31, the first "Almost to madness" is repeated so that there are three total "Almost to madness"-es. I have removed the extra one
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/touchandgo_01_lawrence_128kb.mp3

Thanks
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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wib66 wrote: September 18th, 2021, 1:33 pm
There are just two things I wanted to mention about the edited Act 1, but they're minor, so you might decide to leave them as is:

- At 22:17, "Yorkshire" still sounds a little cut off, but it might have sounded that way in the original. This is how it is in the original

- At 30:31, the first "Almost to madness" is repeated so that there are three total "Almost to madness"-es. I have removed the extra one
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/touchandgo_01_lawrence_128kb.mp3

Thanks
PL OK! Thank you!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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I've PL'd Act 2, and there's one thing I wanted to mention about it, but it's another one of those things you might prefer to leave as is. At 35:06, Job Arthur says, "They've agreed to come out next Friday," (instead of Monday). It wouldn't matter except that later at 36:01 he says, "They're coming out on Monday for certain." Other than that, it's PL OK!
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.

Sarah
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Scarbo wrote: September 19th, 2021, 2:11 pm I've PL'd Act 2, and there's one thing I wanted to mention about it, but it's another one of those things you might prefer to leave as is. At 35:06, Job Arthur says, "They've agreed to come out next Friday," (instead of Monday). It wouldn't matter except that later at 36:01 he says, "They're coming out on Monday for certain." Other than that, it's PL OK!
Thanks I have edited the file so its ready for a spot PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/touchandgo_02_lawrence_128kb.mp3
Michele
When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
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