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Post by SamIAm312 » August 11th, 2020, 9:23 pm

Okay, here are the notes from Narrator chapters 2,3, and 4.

Chapter 2:
9:23, repeats "as the deadly..."
0:00, background noise before reading begins

Chapter 4:
1:01, background noise

Chapter 3 was all good. Also, I noticed that chapters 2 and 4 were missing "Narrator read by..." I wasn't sure if it only needed to be mentioned once, or was necessary in every chapter, but I just wanted to point that out. Sounds great

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Post by wib66 » August 12th, 2020, 3:16 am

SamIAm312 wrote:
August 11th, 2020, 9:23 pm
Okay, here are the notes from Narrator chapters 2,3, and 4.

Chapter 2:
9:23, repeats "as the deadly..."
0:00, background noise before reading begins

Chapter 4:
1:01, background noise

Chapter 3 was all good. Also, I noticed that chapters 2 and 4 were missing "Narrator read by..." I wasn't sure if it only needed to be mentioned once, or was necessary in every chapter, but I just wanted to point that out. Sounds great
Thank you for that I will edit and re upload if you are able to spot PL them afterwards that would be great. Narrator read by only needs to be in one file thanks.
Michele

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Post by wib66 » August 12th, 2020, 3:27 am

Narrator chapters 2 and 4 are ready for a spot PL thanks
Michele

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Post by SamIAm312 » August 14th, 2020, 6:40 pm

Narrator chapters 2 and 4 sound good! Also could I PL Narrator chapters 5-15?

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Post by wib66 » August 15th, 2020, 1:48 am

SamIAm312 wrote:
August 14th, 2020, 6:40 pm
Narrator chapters 2 and 4 sound good! Also could I PL Narrator chapters 5-15?
That would be great thank you
Michele

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Post by MManolakes » August 15th, 2020, 10:32 am

Walter, Chapter 18, duration 12:19

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_walter_18_128kb.mp3

Also, I think I found a couple of errors in how this chapter was colored. In Walter's speech “The life of any American, or any man not a Chinaman and a member of a strange secret order, is in constant peril if that stick remains in his possession,” asserted the stranger seriously., the last words are colored blue for Walter, but they should be uncolored for the narrator. I did not record those ending words.

Then later, there are two paragraphs that follow “They must be members of the society.” The first one is colored red for Frank and the second is blue for Walter, but it makes more sense if they are the other way around. Also, it seems there must be some text missing there before the first paragraph, probably belonging to Frank. I recorded it the way that it was colored, but I will record it again if it does turn out to be an error.

Mike

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Post by wib66 » August 15th, 2020, 12:08 pm

MManolakes wrote:
August 15th, 2020, 10:32 am
Walter, Chapter 18, duration 12:19

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_walter_18_128kb.mp3

Also, I think I found a couple of errors in how this chapter was colored. In Walter's speech “The life of any American, or any man not a Chinaman and a member of a strange secret order, is in constant peril if that stick remains in his possession,” asserted the stranger seriously., the last words are colored blue for Walter, but they should be uncolored for the narrator. I did not record those ending words.

Then later, there are two paragraphs that follow “They must be members of the society.” The first one is colored red for Frank and the second is blue for Walter, but it makes more sense if they are the other way around. Also, it seems there must be some text missing there before the first paragraph, probably belonging to Frank. I recorded it the way that it was colored, but I will record it again if it does turn out to be an error.

Mike
I have changed the colouring in the first one for the narrator.
In the two paragraphs I have swapped the colours around as you say it makes more sense. I have added in Starbright to say They must be members of the society. I have checked against the gutenberg text and it is just the same so if something is missing I am not sure what it might be.

Thank you for spotting those errors if you could record the other paragraph instead that would be great.
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Post by SamIAm312 » August 15th, 2020, 6:09 pm

Alright, everything sounds good except for a couple mistakes.

Chapter 9, 3:32, long pause after "the bullet cut the fuse"
Chapter 12, 1:15, repeats "and it was not wrong to defy"

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Post by wib66 » August 16th, 2020, 2:57 am

MManolakes wrote:
August 15th, 2020, 1:50 pm
Walter, Chapter 18 (corrected), duration 12:17

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_walter_18_128kb.mp3

Mike
Thank you
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Post by wib66 » August 16th, 2020, 2:58 am

SamIAm312 wrote:
August 15th, 2020, 6:09 pm
Alright, everything sounds good except for a couple mistakes.

Chapter 9, 3:32, long pause after "the bullet cut the fuse"
Chapter 12, 1:15, repeats "and it was not wrong to defy"
THank you
Michele

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Post by wib66 » August 16th, 2020, 4:23 am

Narrator chapters 9 and 12 are ready for a spot PL thanks
Michele

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Post by wib66 » August 16th, 2020, 3:14 pm

Walter chapter 18 is PL OK thanks
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Post by julianpratley » August 16th, 2020, 6:23 pm

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Post by SamIAm312 » August 16th, 2020, 10:56 pm

9 and 12 sound good. Also, i listened through chapter 15, so 13, 14, 15 are PL OK. Could I PL narrator chapters 16-19?

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