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Post by wib66 » October 21st, 2020, 11:30 am

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Post by wib66 » October 21st, 2020, 11:30 am

silverquill wrote:
October 21st, 2020, 9:50 am
Well, it has been quite awhile since I submitted the first section for Dick Starbright, and I was hoping to get some feedback before uploading the rest in case there was something I needed to change in my characterization, but I need to move this off my plate, so here are the remaining chapters. All the best on this project.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_14_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_15_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_16_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_17_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_18_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_19_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_20_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_21_128kb.mp3
Sorry Larry for the delay my apologies I will get to these this weekend I am sure they will be ok many thanks
Michele

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Post by wib66 » October 30th, 2020, 12:27 pm

Hi Larry sorry for the delay in PL ing your part but here are the PL Notes

All the files are PL OK just one needs adding please

Chapter 18
Missing line at 3:12
“And I was sure at one time that they were going to draw weapons on us. I believe they did mean to do so.”

Many Thanks
Michele

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Post by wib66 » October 30th, 2020, 12:46 pm

Inza PL Notes

Chapter 19 is PL OK

Chapter 21 is only 1:15 long and there are a lot of lines missing.

Starting on page 4 the first line missing is

Nor did we dream of the strange things to happen in the future. I often think, Frank, that I can never again be quite as happy as I was back there.”

and then there are numerous lines on the last 6 pages. hope this makes sense

Chapter 22
1:13 missing lines
“Oh, dear, no!”
“I’ve not thought of such a thing.”

Many THanks
Michele

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Post by wib66 » October 30th, 2020, 12:56 pm

Jack Diamond
16, 19 and 21 are PL OK
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Post by Twinkle88 » October 30th, 2020, 5:21 pm

wib66 wrote:
October 30th, 2020, 12:46 pm
Inza PL Notes

Chapter 19 is PL OK

Chapter 21 is only 1:15 long and there are a lot of lines missing.

Starting on page 4 the first line missing is

Nor did we dream of the strange things to happen in the future. I often think, Frank, that I can never again be quite as happy as I was back there.”

and then there are numerous lines on the last 6 pages. hope this makes sense

Chapter 22
1:13 missing lines
“Oh, dear, no!”
“I’ve not thought of such a thing.”

Many THanks
Oh, dear! I must have been rushing through to have missed all of that! :oops:

Oh, yeah, and also I think you missed my last two uploads:
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Post by silverquill » October 30th, 2020, 8:51 pm

wib66 wrote:
October 30th, 2020, 12:27 pm
Hi Larry sorry for the delay in PL ing your part but here are the PL Notes

All the files are PL OK just one needs adding please

Chapter 18
Missing line at 3:12
“And I was sure at one time that they were going to draw weapons on us. I believe they did mean to do so.”

Many Thanks
Well, if I missed only one line, that's pretty good for me. :lol:
Here you go:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_18_128kb.mp3
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Post by wib66 » October 31st, 2020, 4:13 am

silverquill wrote:
October 30th, 2020, 8:51 pm
wib66 wrote:
October 30th, 2020, 12:27 pm
Hi Larry sorry for the delay in PL ing your part but here are the PL Notes

All the files are PL OK just one needs adding please

Chapter 18
Missing line at 3:12
“And I was sure at one time that they were going to draw weapons on us. I believe they did mean to do so.”

Many Thanks
Well, if I missed only one line, that's pretty good for me. :lol:
Here you go:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/frankmerriwellstrust_starbright_18_128kb.mp3
THank you that is now PL OK
Michele

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Post by Twinkle88 » November 4th, 2020, 6:51 pm

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Post by OooThatsNifty » November 20th, 2020, 9:41 pm

Could I claim Billy Maddison?

No Adam Sandler impressions, I promise.
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Post by wib66 » November 22nd, 2020, 10:45 am

OooThatsNifty wrote:
November 20th, 2020, 9:41 pm
Could I claim Billy Maddison?

No Adam Sandler impressions, I promise.
Yes no problem thank you for claiming.
Michele

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Post by wib66 » November 22nd, 2020, 11:21 am

Inza PL Notes
Chapter 17, 21, 22 and 26 are PL OK

Chapter 25
PL Notes
Inza chapter 25
1:24 missing line
“I cannot stop, sir. You must excuse me.”

Many Thanks
Michele

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