FULL[PLAY]Sweet Lavender by Pinero - thw

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Post by Kitty » June 18th, 2020, 3:39 am

heres the file with added bits. i redid the line after "Clem" as well so they sounded similar.
17min33 dick act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sweetlavender_dick_1_128kb.mp3
excellent corrections and now PL ok :)
:lol: and another drunken performance. Somehow you manage to make him quite adorable still, in all his drunkeness. And by now you probably dream of "Clement my boy" in your sleep :mrgreen:

great job again, but I found a few lines to edit still:

> at about 14:05: (p. 102) we need another "Bulger !" here

> at 19:04: (p. 108) "forty thousand pounds" – you only say "four" (it's a big difference LOL)

> at 19:23: (p. 108) "important letter from Lavender in the next room" – you say "for Lavender"

the rest was perfect, thanks, looking forward to the finale

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Post by Kitty » June 18th, 2020, 4:10 am

awwww and another super performance, I am being spoiled here today. :9: Well in the first two acts I thought Horace was a fortune-hunting stalker, a bit on the slimy and even insolent side :lol: but in the third act he seems to be genuinely smitten with Minnie. Very interesting characterization. Absolutely well acted out.

Acts 1 and 2 are straight PL ok.

A couple of missed lines in Act 3 though:

> at about 7:10: (p. 180) please insert: "Well it has been going backwards and forwards and all round for some months, but it has only been going on for about..."

> at about 7:32: (p. 183) please insert: "I share your devotion to this old city, Mr Phenyl. London has given me the most fascinating companion."

Thank you Matt. :)

Sonia

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Post by reecedawg » June 18th, 2020, 12:25 pm

Horace Act 3 (7:57) updated with missing lines:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sweetlavender_horace_3_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kitty » June 18th, 2020, 11:40 pm

Andrewjames wrote:
June 18th, 2020, 11:30 am
dick act 2 with bit n bobs! :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sweetlavender_dick_2_128kb.mp3
thank you, Andrew, and now completely PL ok :)

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Post by Kitty » June 18th, 2020, 11:40 pm

reecedawg wrote:
June 18th, 2020, 12:25 pm
Horace Act 3 (7:57) updated with missing lines:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sweetlavender_horace_3_128kb.mp3
same here, excellent additions, Matt, and now also PL ok

see you in another play hopefully soon 8-)

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Post by Algy Pug » June 19th, 2020, 7:45 pm

Oi would be happy the role of Dr Delany.

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Post by Kitty » June 20th, 2020, 3:16 am

Algy Pug wrote:
June 19th, 2020, 7:45 pm
Oi would be happy the role of Dr Delany.
welcome aboard Algy :) I think he is a loveable character, from the glimpses I had of him so far.

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Post by adrianstephens » June 20th, 2020, 5:43 am

Happy to read stage directions, Todd.
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Post by ToddHW » June 20th, 2020, 7:42 am

Thank you. Now we are full.

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Post by Kitty » June 22nd, 2020, 1:32 am

Andrewjames wrote:
June 21st, 2020, 12:20 pm
and the final instalment.
dick act 3 20m17
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/sweetlavender_dick_3_128kb.mp3
an excellent performance till the last, thank you so much Andrew. Good to have you on board for this awesome role. :clap: The whole act is PL ok straight away. Loved it ! Hope to hear you in another play soon.

Sonia

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