excellent corrections and now PL okheres the file with added bits. i redid the line after "Clem" as well so they sounded similar.
17min33 dick act 1
and another drunken performance. Somehow you manage to make him quite adorable still, in all his drunkeness. And by now you probably dream of "Clement my boy" in your sleepdick act 2
great job again, but I found a few lines to edit still:
> at about 14:05: (p. 102) we need another "Bulger !" here
> at 19:04: (p. 108) "forty thousand pounds" – you only say "four" (it's a big difference LOL)
> at 19:23: (p. 108) "important letter from Lavender in the next room" – you say "for Lavender"
the rest was perfect, thanks, looking forward to the finale