FULL [Play] The Young Idea by Noel Coward - dlo

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Post by Ambsweet13 » August 27th, 2020, 7:20 pm

Manders375 wrote:
August 27th, 2020, 6:10 pm
Would I be able to read Gerda? I'm in the US. Thanks!
Yes that would be great! Thank you! :D
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Solo Project Cape Cod

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Post by Bucksaw » September 2nd, 2020, 1:28 pm

I'm back folks!

So very sorry about vanishing - Long story short, I was on vacation and lost power after the Tropical Storms in the East Coast.
Here's Act 1 again with the revision and Act 2 edited and recorded. Act 3 is recorded, I just have to trim it up.

Bucksaw

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_Sholto_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_Sholto_2_128kb.mp3

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Post by Bucksaw » September 2nd, 2020, 1:30 pm

Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 30th, 2020, 10:24 pm
Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 21st, 2020, 12:26 pm
Bucksaw wrote:
July 18th, 2020, 8:29 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_Sholto_1_128kb.mp3

Here's Act 1 up for Sholto. I'll have the next 2 Acts up over the course of this week.

- Buck
Great job with Act 1. Looking forward to hearing the other two acts!

Just one note, at 5:06, you missed two lines "Have you been here long?" and "Yes, thank you, miss."

If you can add these into the recording, Act 1 will be all set.

Thanks! :D
Bumping my PL notes so I can compare them to superk's
Just quoting the PL notes to let you know that I've added the missed line to my recording for Act 1 for Sholto - the line "Yes, thank you, miss." is a Huddle line.

Bucksaw

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Post by superk » September 4th, 2020, 12:33 pm

Bucksaw wrote:
September 2nd, 2020, 1:30 pm
Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 30th, 2020, 10:24 pm
Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 21st, 2020, 12:26 pm

Great job with Act 1. Looking forward to hearing the other two acts!

Just one note, at 5:06, you missed two lines "Have you been here long?" and "Yes, thank you, miss."

If you can add these into the recording, Act 1 will be all set.

Thanks! :D
Bumping my PL notes so I can compare them to superk's
Just quoting the PL notes to let you know that I've added the missed line to my recording for Act 1 for Sholto - the line "Yes, thank you, miss." is a Huddle line.

Bucksaw
Sounds good! I’ll mark it as PL OK!

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Post by Ambsweet13 » September 4th, 2020, 3:43 pm

superk wrote:
September 4th, 2020, 12:33 pm
Bucksaw wrote:
September 2nd, 2020, 1:30 pm
Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 30th, 2020, 10:24 pm

Bumping my PL notes so I can compare them to superk's
Just quoting the PL notes to let you know that I've added the missed line to my recording for Act 1 for Sholto - the line "Yes, thank you, miss." is a Huddle line.

Bucksaw
Sounds good! I’ll mark it as PL OK!
Thank you Bucksaw and superk!
A.M.B. :roll:
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Solo Project Cape Cod

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Post by Ambsweet13 » September 4th, 2020, 3:44 pm

Bucksaw wrote:
September 2nd, 2020, 1:28 pm
I'm back folks!

So very sorry about vanishing - Long story short, I was on vacation and lost power after the Tropical Storms in the East Coast.
Here's Act 1 again with the revision and Act 2 edited and recorded. Act 3 is recorded, I just have to trim it up.

Bucksaw

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_Sholto_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_Sholto_2_128kb.mp3
All good! Ill put Act 2 in as ready for PL!
A.M.B. :roll:
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Solo Project Cape Cod

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Post by JtotheP716 » September 9th, 2020, 6:58 pm


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Post by Ambsweet13 » September 9th, 2020, 7:17 pm

A.M.B. :roll:
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Post by superk » September 17th, 2020, 11:27 am

I just finished doing PL for Sholto Act 2 and Jennifer Act 3.

Jennifer Act 3

- There are moments in between lines where I can hear your mouse clicking. It doesn’t happen while you’re talking, so I assume it can just be edited out when everything is put together.
- There are also moments where there are missing words and some words switch places, but it’s not enough to alter the meaning of the lines so I didn’t bother with them.
- 10:52 the line is “Did you go to the meets and things?” You said “Do you want to go to the meets and things?”
- 13:30 “He made his money out of putting soft [roes] in tins...” You said “roses” instead of “roes.”

Sholto Act 2

- 3:38 “Third [fox-trot] after we get there.” It’s actually a “t” at the beginning making it “tox-trot.” I have no idea what either of these words mean but that’s what it says in the source text.

Keep up the good work, guys!

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Post by Bucksaw » September 17th, 2020, 12:25 pm

Here's the last bit folks.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_Sholto_3_128kb.mp3

Sorry it took so long.
Buck

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Post by JtotheP716 » September 22nd, 2020, 3:22 pm

superk wrote:
September 17th, 2020, 11:27 am
I just finished doing PL for Sholto Act 2 and Jennifer Act 3.

Jennifer Act 3

- There are moments in between lines where I can hear your mouse clicking. It doesn’t happen while you’re talking, so I assume it can just be edited out when everything is put together.
- There are also moments where there are missing words and some words switch places, but it’s not enough to alter the meaning of the lines so I didn’t bother with them.
- 10:52 the line is “Did you go to the meets and things?” You said “Do you want to go to the meets and things?”
- 13:30 “He made his money out of putting soft [roes] in tins...” You said “roses” instead of “roes.”

Sholto Act 2

- 3:38 “Third [fox-trot] after we get there.” It’s actually a “t” at the beginning making it “tox-trot.” I have no idea what either of these words mean but that’s what it says in the source text.

Keep up the good work, guys!
I'll fix all of these in the next couple days. Thanks for all your hard work!

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Post by silverquill » October 12th, 2020, 11:22 pm

Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 29th, 2020, 5:45 pm
silverquill wrote:
July 27th, 2020, 9:20 am
I hope I got all of the Huddle's lines. There are several times, it seems, that comes in and goes out without saying anything.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_huddle_1_128kb.mp3
Great job with Huddle! :D Missed a few lines, but understandably because he comes in and out a ton without saying anything and mainly has lines on the first and last pages of the act!

(p.24 of the script, in the middle of the page) Three lines, "Huddle, miss", "Three years, sir" and "Yes, thank you, miss".
Here is the file again with those delinquent lines:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_huddle_1_128kb.mp3
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Post by Manders375 » October 13th, 2020, 4:57 pm

Here's Act 1 for Gerda: https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_gerda_1_128kb.mp3 (4:25)
This is my first play submission so I hope I did it correctly! Happy to change anything that needs to be fixed. Thanks! :)
Amanda Mehl
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Post by Ambsweet13 » October 19th, 2020, 7:42 pm

silverquill wrote:
October 12th, 2020, 11:22 pm
Ambsweet13 wrote:
July 29th, 2020, 5:45 pm
silverquill wrote:
July 27th, 2020, 9:20 am
I hope I got all of the Huddle's lines. There are several times, it seems, that comes in and goes out without saying anything.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_huddle_1_128kb.mp3
Great job with Huddle! :D Missed a few lines, but understandably because he comes in and out a ton without saying anything and mainly has lines on the first and last pages of the act!

(p.24 of the script, in the middle of the page) Three lines, "Huddle, miss", "Three years, sir" and "Yes, thank you, miss".
Here is the file again with those delinquent lines:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/youngidea_huddle_1_128kb.mp3
Thank you! Huddle is now PL-OK :D
A.M.B. :roll:
Plays The Young Idea Peg O' My Heart
Solo Project Cape Cod

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