three's the charm thank you, Dave, now it's PL okdlantz wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 4:07 amAct 3: length 2:42, size 2.54 MB
the way you say "Couplets !" is priceless. I think by then even Lord Froth may start suspecting something. Excellent fun, Alan, thank you. This is again PL ok.alanmapstone wrote: ↑June 11th, 2020, 9:19 amLord Froth act 5
it didn't strike me too echoey the sound is ok as far as I'm concerned.
Thanks for your kind review, Sonia!Kitty wrote: ↑June 20th, 2020, 5:19 am
For Act 5 you managed to miss the final lines of the Act
> at 7:22: please add:
"Let secret villany from hence be warned;
Howe’er in private mischiefs are conceived,
Torture and shame attend their open birth;
Like vipers in the womb, base treachery lies,
Still gnawing that, whence first it did arise;
No sooner born, but the vile parent dies."
aha, I was waiting for this part Now Maskwell sounds shifty from the first. well done Chris. I think the dialogues with Lady Touchwood will come out quite interesting. All the parts are in as far as I can see, only one small note:SonOfTheExiles wrote: ↑June 20th, 2020, 8:28 pmMaskwell, Act 1 completed: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doubledealer_maskwell_1_128kb.mp3
thank you Larry, perfectly added and I don't think the tone was off too much. It sounds good to me and is PL ok now.silverquill wrote: ↑June 20th, 2020, 10:45 pmI guess I was thrown off by the space, there, but there it is as clear as can be.
The tone doesn't match too well, bur I recorded that whole segment so it won't be quite as noticeable, I hope.
urgh if you have such friends you don't need enemies The last soliloquy is quite revealing and very well done, Chris loved it ! Thank you so much. Totally PL ok again, and also thanks for the full voice credit. (do not get up your hopes for Cynthia )SonOfTheExiles wrote: ↑June 21st, 2020, 6:02 pmThe plot's gravitas, like gravy, thickens.
Maskwell, Act 2: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/doubledealer_maskwell_2_128kb.mp3
Um, yes, and yes.