[FULL] [DramReading] The Story Girl by L. M. Montgomery - tg

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Post by benderca » December 19th, 2020, 2:24 pm

linny wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 2:18 pm
Chapter 13 is PL OK.
Thanks! :clap:

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Post by benderca » December 19th, 2020, 2:28 pm

linny wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 2:05 pm
Chapter 14 - optional notes on spacing. The only one I highly recommend is the 2 seconds at 15:36.

5:26 I suggest tightening the spacing a bit before Peter asks “what does that mean?” also at 15:28 and 15:36.
Thanks! Will do!

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Post by linny » December 19th, 2020, 2:41 pm

Chapter 21 is PL OK. I really enjoyed that chapter. :D

MW updated. I took advantage of my MC powers :wink:

You are now all caught up. Really nice work on the editing!

I have two weeks off so I can keep up on PLing throughout that time. After that I may get delayed a day or so but I'll get to it.
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Post by benderca » December 19th, 2020, 2:52 pm

Dan, Chapters 26, 27 & 29 are all PL OK! And that's a wrap for Dan! :clap: :clap: :clap:

Thank you tons, Diego!!! (I'm looking forward to your joining us in the sequel! :wink: )

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Post by benderca » December 19th, 2020, 2:57 pm

linny wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 2:41 pm
Chapter 21 is PL OK. I really enjoyed that chapter. :D

MW updated. I took advantage of my MC powers :wink:

You are now all caught up. Really nice work on the editing!

I have two weeks off so I can keep up on PLing throughout that time. After that I may get delayed a day or so but I'll get to it.
Thank you soooo much, Linny! :clap: :clap: :clap: I put you down on the first page as "Chapters-PL" -- I hope that's okay. I should have some more chapters ready for you to PL this week.
TJ

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Post by Bookworm360 » December 19th, 2020, 4:55 pm

Hi benderca, I am moving and am not able to do any recording. Expect the resubmissions some time in January/February. We hope to be settled in then. I am SUPER Sorry for the inconvenience. :(
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Post by cadastra » December 19th, 2020, 7:22 pm

cadastra wrote:
July 29th, 2020, 10:54 am
benderca wrote:
July 28th, 2020, 4:03 am
Story Girl, Chapter 10:

5:19
You left out the word "must" which slightly changes the meaning, but not enough to worry about:
"A good many of them must just stay plain angels, I expect."

Since I don't have any other notes, I'll just mark this as PL OK. Please let me know if you want to correct it.
I will fix it!
At 05:19 for spot check - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_10_128kb.mp3
benderca wrote:
May 5th, 2020, 2:56 pm
Story Girl, Chapter 12:

2:31 "He acted mean right through, Aunt Janet says." Instead of "through," you say "though."

00:58, 02:58, 03:07
I've never heard your pronunciation of "Montreal," Canada before. It sounds to me like the French pronunciation of "Mount" and the French pronunciation of Royal, so roy-AL. [ . . . ]
Whoops, I accidentally used the French pronunciation. Thank you for catching that. I ended up re-recording the chapter because there were multiple mistakes in the original recording and I wanted to maintain consistency in the quality and texture of my voice, as well as in the placement of my microphone and recording environment, which has changed since May. https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_12_128kb.mp3
benderca wrote:
May 7th, 2020, 3:19 am
The Story Girl, Chapter 18:

04:20 "The gods were not all beautiful, you know."

You say "The gods were not AT all beautiful, you know."
At 04:20 for spot check - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_18_128kb.mp3.
benderca wrote:
August 14th, 2020, 2:23 pm
Story Girl Chapter 24

0:44, 2:02, 4:04

I have a tiny favor to ask of you. Could you please pronounce "Bowen" (as in Peg Bowen) with a long "o" (like in bow tie)? [ . . . ]
Ready for spot check at 0:45, 02:02, and 04:04. The line at 0:57 has also been re-recorded. https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_24_128kb.mp3
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Post by cadastra » December 19th, 2020, 10:12 pm

Chapter 8 - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_08_128kb.mp3
Chapter 23 - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_23_128kb.mp3
Chapter 27 - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_27_128kb.mp3

All done! Let me know if there are any corrections needed. Also, let me know if there is anything I can do to help you get this project all the way to the finish line!
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Post by benderca » December 20th, 2020, 5:44 pm

cadastra wrote:
December 19th, 2020, 10:12 pm
Chapter 8 - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_08_128kb.mp3
Chapter 23 - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_23_128kb.mp3
Chapter 27 - https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_storygirl_27_128kb.mp3

All done! Let me know if there are any corrections needed. Also, let me know if there is anything I can do to help you get this project all the way to the finish line!
This is soooo exciting! Thank you, Cadastra! I can't wait to listen!

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Post by benderca » December 20th, 2020, 6:13 pm

Fantastic, Elijah! I see light at the end of the tunnel!!!


Chapters 8, 17, and 18 are all PL OK! Nice reading!



In Chapter 19, you left out one line at about 1:06:

"I'm sure I won't sleep a wink to-night," said Felix. (page 13)

Thanks,
TJ

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Post by benderca » December 22nd, 2020, 7:36 am

Story Girl, Chapter 8:

1:38 Missing Line:
"Bury it," (p. 6)

Aw, what a heart-breaking story. Well read, Cadastra!

Story Girl Chapter 23 is PL OK!
Last edited by benderca on January 14th, 2021, 11:37 am, edited 4 times in total.

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Post by cadastra » December 22nd, 2020, 7:47 am

benderca wrote:
December 22nd, 2020, 7:36 am
Story Girl, Chapter 8:

1:38 Missing Line:
"Bury it," (p. 6)

Aw, what a heart-breaking story. Well read, Cadastra!

Story Girl Chapter 23 is PL OK!
Oh boy. The number of times I recorded that line, too! Will edit!
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Post by benderca » December 22nd, 2020, 7:52 am

Whoa! Another heart-breaking story. Well told!

Story Girl Chapter 27 is also PL OK!

Thanks, Cadastra!

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Post by benderca » December 22nd, 2020, 7:53 am

cadastra wrote:
December 22nd, 2020, 7:47 am
benderca wrote:
December 22nd, 2020, 7:36 am
Story Girl, Chapter 8:

1:38 Missing Line:
"Bury it," (p. 6)

Aw, what a heart-breaking story. Well read, Cadastra!

Story Girl Chapter 23 is PL OK!
Oh boy. The number of times I recorded that line, too! Will edit!
I thought it might have been an editing mistake because you read the line before it twice. You probably cut out the wrong section. Ooops. :wink:

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