Welcome to Librivox, Diego! I see this is your first project, so we will need to set up a profile page for you. Please let me know under which name or pseudonym you'd like to appear in the LibriVox catalogue. We can also link to a personal website/blog.
Great acting with Billy Robinson!
I have a few technical and logistical issues:
Please leave the brackets out of the title. So when you export your file from Audacity to mp3 format, it should be named: storygirl_billyrobinson_06_128kb.mp3
Then when you go to the uploader, instead of choosing "tests" (as you did for your 1-minute test), you need to select the MC of the project, which for this project is: TriciaG
So then when you post your link to this project, it will look like this:
The volume of your recording is too low. It is 78.4db and we aim for 86-92dB here at Librivox. I can increase the volume myself, but I tried it and it sounds a little mechanical. I think if you increase the volume of your original recording before converting to mp3, it will sound slightly better. To do this, simply highlight your entire file in Audacity. Then click "Effect" from the top bar, then click "Amplify" and put 11 dB into the amplification box. Then save, export as mp3, upload, and post back here.
I advise you to download the program "Checker 0.96", so that you can check your own files before uploading them. Here is a link to explain:
Otherwise, your reading of the role is perfect! I love the emphasis you put on "NEVER" in "never tell a soul" -- fantastic portrayal all around! I hope to hear your voice in more dramatic readings.
There are still some parts open in "Little Men": viewtopic.php?f=27&t=78657