COMPLETE[PLAY]The Old Bachelor by William Congreve - thw

Solo or group recordings that are finished and fully available for listeners
Post Reply
Kitty
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 22770
Joined: March 28th, 2014, 5:57 am

Post by Kitty » April 11th, 2020, 2:29 pm

MrsHand wrote:
April 11th, 2020, 12:08 pm
Here's Sharper!
yay, thank you Kristin :) Sharper is quite the schemer here, well done. I love the overall nonchalance you put into the role, as if nothing really affects him. :thumbs: Well done.

Acts 1-4 already PL ok.

One small note for Act 5 though:

> at 0:41: "this letter, that so sticks in thy maw, is counterfeit" - you say "my maw"

thank you

Sonia

MrsHand
Posts: 3966
Joined: September 12th, 2013, 11:54 am
Location: Indianapolis, IN

Post by MrsHand » April 12th, 2020, 7:45 am

I redid the whole line because I didn't like the edit, but now all should be well!


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_05_128kb.mp3

Kitty
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 22770
Joined: March 28th, 2014, 5:57 am

Post by Kitty » April 12th, 2020, 8:11 am

MrsHand wrote:
April 12th, 2020, 7:45 am
I redid the whole line because I didn't like the edit, but now all should be well!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_sharper_05_128kb.mp3
indeed, PL ok now, thank you :)

Sonia


ToddHW
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 10541
Joined: August 14th, 2011, 4:24 am
Contact:

Post by ToddHW » April 13th, 2020, 5:31 am

Thank you.

Todd

Craigos
Posts: 644
Joined: November 17th, 2016, 8:42 am
Location: UK
Contact:

Post by Craigos » April 13th, 2020, 6:49 am


ToddHW
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 10541
Joined: August 14th, 2011, 4:24 am
Contact:

Post by ToddHW » April 13th, 2020, 7:34 am

Thank you.

Todd

Kitty
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 22770
Joined: March 28th, 2014, 5:57 am

Post by Kitty » April 13th, 2020, 9:24 am

Craigos wrote:
April 13th, 2020, 6:49 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_barnaby_4_128kb.mp3 0:59
Corrected intro.
thank you, and PL ok now :)

Sonia

Kitty
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 22770
Joined: March 28th, 2014, 5:57 am

Post by Kitty » April 13th, 2020, 9:33 am

and thanks Elijah :) nice to have you in here as well. I guess you were relieved that these roles were much easier than in the Jonson play :mrgreen:

Everything can be marked PL ok straight away. :clap: Nice job. The volume is a bit low in them all, but Todd will adjust that anyway.

There was a small difference in Music-master Act 2, but I think your version can make sense too, so I'll pass it :) Just for info, in case you want to be wordperfect:

> at 0:36: "wakes 'em from the golden dream" - you say "walks them". He is waking them up from the dream, but walking them away from their dream kinda conveys the same, so this is ok for me. It's even more poetic in a way.

Thanks

Sonia

ej400
Posts: 2728
Joined: September 24th, 2014, 10:26 am
Location: Minnesota

Post by ej400 » April 13th, 2020, 12:43 pm

Kitty wrote:
April 13th, 2020, 9:33 am
and thanks Elijah :) nice to have you in here as well. I guess you were relieved that these roles were much easier than in the Jonson play :mrgreen:

Everything can be marked PL ok straight away. :clap: Nice job. The volume is a bit low in them all, but Todd will adjust that anyway.

There was a small difference in Music-master Act 2, but I think your version can make sense too, so I'll pass it :) Just for info, in case you want to be wordperfect:

> at 0:36: "wakes 'em from the golden dream" - you say "walks them". He is waking them up from the dream, but walking them away from their dream kinda conveys the same, so this is ok for me. It's even more poetic in a way.

Thanks

Sonia
Thank you, Sonia! I'll probably edit that line then. :D

Availle
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 17565
Joined: August 1st, 2009, 11:30 pm
Contact:

Post by Availle » April 15th, 2020, 5:31 am

Availle wrote:
April 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm
OH, I love forsaken mistresses... could I, no, not be one :shock: , but read that part?
Umm... once again, I cannot find any lines of her, only a single one in the very last scene:

SYLV. The worst of me is, that I am your wife—

Could you confirm that please?
Cheers,
Ava.

--
AvailleAudio.com

Kitty
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 22770
Joined: March 28th, 2014, 5:57 am

Post by Kitty » April 15th, 2020, 6:40 am

Availle wrote:
April 15th, 2020, 5:31 am
Availle wrote:
April 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm
OH, I love forsaken mistresses... could I, no, not be one :shock: , but read that part?
Umm... once again, I cannot find any lines of her, only a single one in the very last scene:

SYLV. The worst of me is, that I am your wife—

Could you confirm that please?
no, she has a lot more. Check for "Silv." I think, it's only once at the end where she is spelled "Sylv."

Sonia

Availle
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 17565
Joined: August 1st, 2009, 11:30 pm
Contact:

Post by Availle » April 15th, 2020, 6:44 am

True! I only checked Sylvia, since this is how it's spelled in the Dramatis Personae.

I wanted to record this tonight, but there are ahem... lovesick cats roaming outside. I don't think this is conducive to my recording. :lol:
Cheers,
Ava.

--
AvailleAudio.com

Kitty
LibriVox Admin Team
Posts: 22770
Joined: March 28th, 2014, 5:57 am

Post by Kitty » April 15th, 2020, 6:47 am

Availle wrote:
April 15th, 2020, 6:44 am
I wanted to record this tonight, but there are ahem... lovesick cats roaming outside. I don't think this is conducive to my recording. :lol:
:mrgreen: it would add steam to Sylvia. She seems not adverse to love herself. Well there is still time...the cats have to sleep at some point :shock:

Sonia

BLNEW
Posts: 44
Joined: June 22nd, 2019, 9:22 pm

Post by BLNEW » April 19th, 2020, 6:30 pm

Hi,

I wanted to follow up on my request for a one month extension requested April 11th, 2:22 pm. I haven't heard back on it and the original due date is tomorrow.

Thanks,
~B

Post Reply