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Post by ToddHW » April 8th, 2020, 6:53 pm

Thank you.

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Post by Kitty » April 9th, 2020, 6:49 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
April 8th, 2020, 5:32 pm
Here is capricious Vainlove:
"vain" describes this character well :lol: I loved the sneer in your voice throughout and the faux-outrage in the final act. Great job Tomas

Acts 1-4 already PL ok

I would only have a suggestion for Act 5 to change the emphasis of one sentence:

> at 1:52: "I know whom you have not got" - this is in direct reply to Sir Joseph's "Mr. Vainlove, I suppose you know whom I have got". So it would sound better if you stress "not" here: "I know whom you have NOT got."

Other than that, all perfect :) thanks

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Post by Craigos » April 9th, 2020, 12:20 pm

Could I take on Barnaby please.

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Post by Kitty » April 9th, 2020, 12:41 pm

Craigos wrote:
April 9th, 2020, 12:20 pm
Could I take on Barnaby please.
thank you Craig. You know you will be butlering in a den of sin here ? :mrgreen: Mistress Fondlewife (that's me) is taking marital faithfulness quite lightly

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Post by Craigos » April 9th, 2020, 12:42 pm

I can cope with that.

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Post by WiltedScribe » April 9th, 2020, 2:59 pm

Kitty wrote:
April 9th, 2020, 6:49 am
I would only have a suggestion for Act 5 to change the emphasis of one sentence:

> at 1:52: "I know whom you have not got" - this is in direct reply to Sir Joseph's "Mr. Vainlove, I suppose you know whom I have got". So it would sound better if you stress "not" here: "I know whom you have NOT got."
Yes, that makes so much more sense. Thank you for pointing it out, Sonia. I made the change and it's ready for quick spot PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_vainlove_5_128kb.mp3
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Post by ToddHW » April 9th, 2020, 3:52 pm

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Post by Kitty » April 10th, 2020, 1:43 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
April 9th, 2020, 2:59 pm
Yes, that makes so much more sense. Thank you for pointing it out, Sonia. I made the change and it's ready for quick spot PL:
yes that's how I meant :thumbs: sounds better, thank you Tomas. PL ok now

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Post by Kitty » April 10th, 2020, 11:31 am

Craigos wrote:
April 10th, 2020, 7:53 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oldbachelor_barnaby_4_128kb.mp3 57s
Another short one for you,
thank you, Craig. :) Barnaby is quite an original :lol: the final comparison was quite risqué, but accurate to the situation here :mrgreen:

only one small addition please:

> for the voice credit please always include the full description, here "Barnaby, servant to Fondlewife, read by Craig Franklin"

thanks

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Post by MrsHand » April 10th, 2020, 11:39 am

Could I read Sharper?

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Post by ToddHW » April 10th, 2020, 12:13 pm

Thank you.

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Post by ToddHW » April 11th, 2020, 12:27 pm

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Post by BLNEW » April 11th, 2020, 2:22 pm

Hello,

Could I please have a one month extension on Araminta? With all that is going on with telecommuting and my new limited quiet time provided by those around me, I won't be able to get to it before the 20th of this month.

Thanks,
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