OPEN[PLAY]The Princess of Elis by Molière - thw

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Post by LydiaCW » March 14th, 2020, 1:51 pm

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Post by ToddHW » March 14th, 2020, 1:54 pm

Thank you.

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Post by Kitty » March 15th, 2020, 7:31 am

LydiaCW wrote:
March 14th, 2020, 1:51 pm
Here's Aglanta:
hehe, quite a nice touch at the end, you really sound annoyed with the Princess for keeping you from your happiness in love. :thumbs: well acted out.

There are a few stumbles that could be cut out. I think maybe you uploaded the unedited files by mistake :hmm:

Act 2:
> at 0:13: (p. 43) stumble and repeat: "like you I love tranquil retreats" - can be cut once
> at 1:17: (p. 44) stumble and repeat: "love knows how to revenge himself" can be cut once, I would in fact use the first version at 1:09, because there you said "revenge" correctly, in the second version it sounds more like "resevenge"

just out of curiosity: why did you leave so much silence at the end ? 5 seconds are also enough in stage plays ;)

Act 4:
> at 0:15: (p. 59) stumble and repeat "but madam... etc" - can be cut once
> checker also tells me the volume is a bit over 93 dB, maybe you could decrease it a little bit

thanks :)

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Post by LydiaCW » March 16th, 2020, 1:39 pm

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Post by ToddHW » March 16th, 2020, 3:55 pm

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Post by Kitty » March 17th, 2020, 5:02 am

thank you, Lydia, all PL ok now. Though Act 4 is still over the volume limit, but I'll make a note for Todd, he will equalize that in the editing phase :)

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Post by ToddHW » March 21st, 2020, 6:56 am

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Post by Kitty » March 21st, 2020, 10:23 am

Availle wrote:
March 21st, 2020, 6:14 am
Here comes the titular character, all 5 acts of her:
super performance, Availle :clap: oooh the Princess is really quite nasty with the men, but in the end when she becomes jealous, she is quite petulant too :lol: I enjoyed listening to it all, it's a good characterization.

And nothing missing as far as I can see, so PL ok for all of them

Thank you !!!

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Post by alanmapstone » March 21st, 2020, 10:40 am

Hi Todd

As Iphitas appears in different acts to Arbates would it help if I read his lines as well. I could do different funny voice.

"He do the police in different voices" T S Eliot after Dickens :lol:
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Post by ToddHW » March 21st, 2020, 12:39 pm

Okay, Alan. Give it a try.

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Post by alanmapstone » March 23rd, 2020, 10:20 am

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Post by ToddHW » March 23rd, 2020, 11:53 am

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Post by Kitty » March 24th, 2020, 7:36 am

and straight PL ok, thank you, Alan :) the father is much too indulgent with the haughty princess :lol: no wonder she can get away with her caprices.

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Post by alanmapstone » March 24th, 2020, 7:42 am

Kitty wrote:
March 24th, 2020, 7:36 am
and straight PL ok, thank you, Alan :) the father is much too indulgent with the haughty princess :lol: no wonder she can get away with her caprices.
I thought he seemed quite a nice old boy and quite enlightened for a father in that time.
Hope things are better with you 😺
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