RobMarland wrote: ↑
January 14th, 2020, 7:34 am
Here is the Chevalier Walkinshaw for PL. I had a lot of fun with this one. What a terrific scumbag!
oh, Rob, this performance is absolutely brilliant
I can't wait to hear this all assembled, one of the funniest of Pinero's comedies I dare say. You play him so perfectly despicable but also so cringingly cowardly at times and at the end almost endearingly desparate that it's simply hilarious. Oh he will be so crushed by Rosaline when they get home
I have found a few things to correct still, but considering this was such a long performance, it was absolutely a great job and in so short a time.
> at 0:27
: you have two versions of "Florence !"
is there one you prefer, then you can cut the other one
> from 2:45-2:49
: "your last, pardon me ? One moment please." – the long silence can get cut
as there are no stage directions in between
> at about 15:08
: (p. 58) you forgot the final exclamation: "My wife ! The devil !
" (that would be me, you scoundrel
> at about 0:09
: (p. 62) missed line: "All I want is to be allowed to lie down here with my face to the wall.
> at about 9:15
: (p. 73) missed lines: "Joslyn, let me out, let me out, let me out, I want to speak to you one word. Let me out, Joslyn, and I'll make it worth your while.
> at about 10:03
: (p. 74) missed line: "Yes, everybody seems to be in this hotel.
> from 14:21-14:33
: (p. 78) there are 3 versions of "Oh !
", in the book there are only 2. You could cut out the one you like least