FULL[PLAY]Don Garcia of Navarre, or The Jealous Prince by Moliere - thw

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Post by ToddHW » November 25th, 2019, 4:05 am

Thank you.

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Post by Kitty » November 25th, 2019, 5:23 am

ah yes, you play out the jealousy quite expertly, Kurt :thumbs: At one of two occasions where you shout at poor Elvira I nearly jumped in my seat. :lol: But the sensitive side is also very endearing (only one cannot really believe that he will keep his promise :roll: )

Both sections PL ok, only be careful with the space between quotes, sometimes it's a bit short. At least 2 seconds are recommended, so that the editing task is not too complicated for Todd.

Oh and something else:

> at 0:05: "read by Kurt" – don't say "act 1" here inside your voice credit, that won't be included, and it's difficult to cut it out, the way you said it here ;) no need to reupload here, but maybe insert a new voice credit for Act 3, then we can use that one

Thanks !!! Looking forward to the rest

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Post by ToddHW » November 27th, 2019, 12:58 pm

With the exception of the recent Johnson biography play, which had a separate cast list for each act in the printed script, I only do a single cast list for the entire play. So “Act 1”, “Act 2”, etc in the voice credits is not appropriate. (The MW is set up with a section per act so that you don’t have to submit all your files at the same time, and so that you can get PL OK on one act even before another act is recorded. But that isn’t the way the cast list will go.)

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Post by kwpapke » November 28th, 2019, 10:34 am

ToddHW wrote:
November 27th, 2019, 12:58 pm
With the exception of the recent Johnson biography play, which had a separate cast list for each act in the printed script, I only do a single cast list for the entire play. So “Act 1”, “Act 2”, etc in the voice credits is not appropriate. (The MW is set up with a section per act so that you don’t have to submit all your files at the same time, and so that you can get PL OK on one act even before another act is recorded. But that isn’t the way the cast list will go.)

Thanks, Todd
I reuploaded with the Act # deleted:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_dongarcia_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_dongarcia_2_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kitty » November 28th, 2019, 11:48 am

kwpapke wrote:
November 28th, 2019, 10:34 am
I reuploaded with the Act # deleted:
thanks, Kurt, but you didn't have to, it would have been enough to do a normal voice credit in Act 3. :)

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Post by silverquill » November 28th, 2019, 10:38 pm

Did I miss something?
This is all I could find for Don Pedro

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_donpedro_4_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kitty » November 29th, 2019, 1:27 am

silverquill wrote:
November 28th, 2019, 10:38 pm
Did I miss something?
This is all I could find for Don Pedro
:lol: indeed this is a big difference from your Pinero stage direction jobs :mrgreen: no I think all the lines are in, but could you just complete the voice credit please ?

> at 0:01: for the voice credit could you please say the entire description, so we don't have to insert the narrator for that: "Don Pedro, gentleman usher to Inez, read by Larry Wilson"

the rest is perfect ! Thanks

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Post by silverquill » November 30th, 2019, 12:38 am

Kitty wrote:
November 29th, 2019, 1:27 am
silverquill wrote:
November 28th, 2019, 10:38 pm
Did I miss something?
This is all I could find for Don Pedro
:lol: indeed this is a big difference from your Pinero stage direction jobs :mrgreen: no I think all the lines are in, but could you just complete the voice credit please ?

> at 0:01: for the voice credit could you please say the entire description, so we don't have to insert the narrator for that: "Don Pedro, gentleman usher to Inez, read by Larry Wilson"

the rest is perfect ! Thanks

Sonia
Duh!
I know better than that, so here it is:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_donpedro_4_128kb.mp3

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Post by alanmapstone » November 30th, 2019, 7:25 am

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Post by Kitty » December 2nd, 2019, 5:57 am

silverquill wrote:
November 30th, 2019, 12:38 am
Duh!
I know better than that, so here it is:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_donpedro_4_128kb.mp3
yes thank you, now completely PL ok :)

Sonia

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Post by Kitty » December 2nd, 2019, 6:07 am

Don Lopez is soooooo shifty in the final scene. :lol: I had to grin all through the speeches. Excellently done, Alan, thank you so much.

However in the very final sentence you managed to make a small error ;)

> at 6:07: "you yourself shall judge what you ought to think of it" - you say "what I ought to think", which is not what was meant here

the rest is perfect !

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Post by Kitty » December 2nd, 2019, 6:30 am

kwpapke wrote:
November 29th, 2019, 2:04 pm
Acts 3-5 ready for PL:
and I didn't forget you, Kurt, all three acts perfectly PL ok as well. I love the ups and downs of love and jealousy Don Garcia is going through. You play his exasperation to perfection. 8-) And in the final sentence you are soooo excited with relief :lol: a very good performance, a great come-back !

I hope I'll be hearing you in the next play soon.

Thanks

Sonia

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Post by ToddHW » December 8th, 2019, 1:51 am

Kitty wrote:
November 18th, 2019, 10:35 am
first in :) here is the lovely Donna Inez, who'd rather die than marry the wrong guy. She gets her well-deserved happiness:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_inez_4_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:02 min.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/jealousprince_inez_5_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 2:53 min.

Sonia
I am sure that her being PL OK for both acts will lead her to great happiness in her future!

Thanks, Todd

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