The file was misnamed in the above post. The updated Act 3 has been uploaded.
Act 2 was updated to correct the reader credit.
excellent, thank you, Alan. I loved the way you talked to Clarin in your first remark to him. Quite snippish, well done. And then when Livia shows up you mutate into a starry-eyed lover so cute.alanmapstone wrote: ↑November 21st, 2019, 8:53 amMoscon act 1
argh, I was debating with this line and decided to cut it out again. Should have left it in, sorry. Will reupload soon.
yes I also found that annoying, and didn't really know how to emphasise it properly swapping them around may help. If you need any re-dos, just tell meAll of the beginning-of-scene instructions are presented very confusingly - they say who enters new, and then I think list who was already there (but only sometimes).
and Moscon is again PL ok. Haha the scene with Livia will be very funny I predict. Moscon is a bit of a blunderer here.alanmapstone wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2019, 9:39 amMoscon act 2
the performance in the final act is the best yet. Moscon's slight thickness shines through in every line here. But sometimes he has moments of lucidity and can be quite snappy. Intersting character.alanmapstone wrote: ↑November 28th, 2019, 9:02 amMoscon act 3