COMPLETE Jack and Jill by Louisa May Alcott - rap
Jack Chapters 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 18, and 19 are PL OK!
Last edited by Twinkle88 on March 11th, 2020, 7:09 pm, edited 1 time in total.
PL notes for Jack:
Chapter 14:
- Misread word and repeat @ 0:10: "Don't squeeze the breath out of me, please."
- Repeat @ 5:27: "There's one thing I like better, though I'd be very sorry to lose my report."
Chapter 15:
- Missing word @ 4:51: "And I'll teach you to swim, and roll you over the beach, and get sea-weed and shells, and no end of nice things, and we'll all come home as strong as lions." (Leaving the "you" out changes the meaning, as he's referring to pushing Jill around in a wheelchair, I believe.)
Chapter 20:
- The song @ 4:28 needs to be recorded with a similar timing to the sing-along version linked in the script. Next time, wear headphones and listen to the sing-along version while you record, singing along with it.
Also, at least one of your recordings needs an intro at the beginning of it, and so far none of them have one. Please add it to at least one of the chapters.
Chapter 14:
- Misread word and repeat @ 0:10: "Don't squeeze the breath out of me, please."
- Repeat @ 5:27: "There's one thing I like better, though I'd be very sorry to lose my report."
Chapter 15:
- Missing word @ 4:51: "And I'll teach you to swim, and roll you over the beach, and get sea-weed and shells, and no end of nice things, and we'll all come home as strong as lions." (Leaving the "you" out changes the meaning, as he's referring to pushing Jill around in a wheelchair, I believe.)
Chapter 20:
- The song @ 4:28 needs to be recorded with a similar timing to the sing-along version linked in the script. Next time, wear headphones and listen to the sing-along version while you record, singing along with it.
Also, at least one of your recordings needs an intro at the beginning of it, and so far none of them have one. Please add it to at least one of the chapters.
Last edited by Twinkle88 on March 11th, 2020, 7:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Since Jill Chapter 7 is all that's needed for Chapter 7 to be edited, I'll go ahead and PL it.
Jill Chapter 7 is PL OK!
Chapter 7 is ready to edit!
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Thank you, but I will continue to PL anything that is over two weeks old. Not to sound like a smart aleck, but don't forget this goes along with the rule I set in the past, as well as the one you set for yourself previously :
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Oh, shoot, I typed that in the Magic Window wrong. Jack Chapter 7 is actually PL OK, I believe... but I'll double check.
Yes, I think I just entered that in wrong. It's PL OK.
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I found this note in the thread, is it incorrect?
Campbell
pronouns: they/them
pronouns: they/them
Oh. I see that now. Sorry!
It's up to you if you want to get started on it, but I'll take the "Ready to Edit" note off that chapter.
It's up to you if you want to get started on it, but I'll take the "Ready to Edit" note off that chapter.
To make things bold in an MW, you put <b> and </b> around the text.ej400 wrote: ↑March 11th, 2020, 10:19 am Another thing is, how do you make things in bold [bold] text in the MW? I've always wondered how people make things highlighted too. That why I have typically only been marking things PL OK, or See PL notes and not highlighting the number.
Anyway, thanks again!
To make things highlighted in, for example, green, you put <font color="green"> and </font> around the text.
Awesome. Thank you for all your PLing!
OK, I'll get those fixed as soon as possible.
That's true. I will stick to that rule.
Oh cool, thank you for teaching me how. I've been wondering for probably 5 years now, just never asked
Oh good. That was the one thing I was worried most about. There was also just so much traffic driving by on the road this morning (it's an in town road, and usually not busy at all). Today was like garbage day, school, 5 or six trains in 4 hours, at least 20 cars and loud pickup trucks..... and usually I only hear 5 vehicles max. Some people were out to screw my recordings up
Oh, my!! What a recording nightmare! I *ahem* sometimes get a little irritated when there’s background noise disrupting my recording session that’s out of my control.
But fortunately, your recordings still sounded fine in spite of the background activities.
But fortunately, your recordings still sounded fine in spite of the background activities.