FULL [DR] Jack and Jill by Louisa May Alcott - rap

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:33 pm

Jack Chapters 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 18, and 19 are PL OK! :thumbs:
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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:33 pm

PL notes for Jack:

Chapter 14:
- Misread word and repeat @ 0:10: "Don't squeeze the breath out of me, please."
- Repeat @ 5:27: "There's one thing I like better, though I'd be very sorry to lose my report."

Chapter 15:
- Missing word @ 4:51: "And I'll teach you to swim, and roll you over the beach, and get sea-weed and shells, and no end of nice things, and we'll all come home as strong as lions." (Leaving the "you" out changes the meaning, as he's referring to pushing Jill around in a wheelchair, I believe.)

Chapter 20:
- The song @ 4:28 needs to be recorded with a similar timing to the sing-along version linked in the script. Next time, wear headphones and listen to the sing-along version while you record, singing along with it.


Also, at least one of your recordings needs an intro at the beginning of it, and so far none of them have one. Please add it to at least one of the chapters.
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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:48 pm

Since Jill Chapter 7 is all that's needed for Chapter 7 to be edited, I'll go ahead and PL it.

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:48 pm

Jill Chapter 7 is PL OK! :thumbs:

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:48 pm

Chapter 7 is ready to edit! :clap:

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:57 pm

ej400 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 7:26 am
Also Twinkle, I think I can finish up the rest of the PLing. My schedule is pretty open now, so I can finish the parts PLing and final chapters. Thank you for catching me up on everything! I appreciate it, but now I gotta do my part. :thumbs: :D
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Thank you, but I will continue to PL anything that is over two weeks old. Not to sound like a smart aleck, but don't forget this goes along with the rule I set in the past, as well as the one you set for yourself previously :) :
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My goal is that nobody should wait more than two weeks, so twinkle, if a section has waited over more than two weeks, someone can PL it for me. This way I'm not holding anyone up.

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » March 11th, 2020, 6:57 pm

Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 6:48 pm
Chapter 7 is ready to edit! :clap:
Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 6:48 pm
Chapter 7 is ready to edit! :clap:
Yay! Except for that one Jack line that has a note... I can still get started and just put that line in when it is fixed.
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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 6:59 pm

Oh, shoot, I typed that in the Magic Window wrong. Jack Chapter 7 is actually PL OK, I believe... but I'll double check.

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 7:01 pm

Yes, I think I just entered that in wrong. It's PL OK.

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » March 11th, 2020, 7:02 pm

Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 4:27 pm
PL notes for Jack Chapter 7:

- Audio glitch and pause @ 4:10: "Look here, you just trundle me into my den, please, I'm going to have a nap, it's so dull to-day I don't feel like doing much,"
I found this note in the thread, is it incorrect?
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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 7:07 pm

Oh. :oops: I see that now. Sorry!

It's up to you if you want to get started on it, but I'll take the "Ready to Edit" note off that chapter.

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 7:07 pm

ej400 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 10:19 am
Another thing is, how do you make things in bold [bold] text in the MW? I've always wondered how people make things highlighted too. That why I have typically only been marking things PL OK, or See PL notes and not highlighting the number.

Anyway, thanks again! :D
To make things bold in an MW, you put <b> and </b> around the text.
To make things highlighted in, for example, green, you put <font color="green"> and </font> around the text.

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 7:11 pm

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March 11th, 2020, 11:41 am
Does the background noise seem OK by the way? I'm using my computer to record from audacity and wanted to make sure it wasn't picking up too much.
The level of background noise is very low. Not a problem at all. :thumbs:

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Post by ej400 » March 11th, 2020, 9:37 pm

Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 6:33 pm
Jack Chapters 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 18, and 19 are PL OK! :thumbs:
Awesome. Thank you for all your PLing!
Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 6:33 pm
PL notes for Jack:
OK, I'll get those fixed as soon as possible.
Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 6:57 pm
Thank you, but I will continue to PL anything that is over two weeks old. Not to sound like a smart aleck, but don't forget this goes along with the rule I set in the past, as well as the one you set for yourself previously :
That's true. I will stick to that rule.
Twinkle88 wrote:
March 11th, 2020, 7:07 pm
To make things bold in an MW, you put <b> and </b> around the text.
To make things highlighted in, for example, green, you put <font color="green"> and </font> around the text.
Oh cool, thank you for teaching me how. I've been wondering for probably 5 years now, just never asked
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The level of background noise is very low. Not a problem at all.
:lol:

Oh good. That was the one thing I was worried most about. There was also just so much traffic driving by on the road this morning (it's an in town road, and usually not busy at all). Today was like garbage day, school, 5 or six trains in 4 hours, at least 20 cars and loud pickup trucks..... and usually I only hear 5 vehicles max. Some people were out to screw my recordings up :lol:

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Post by Twinkle88 » March 11th, 2020, 9:42 pm

Oh, my!! What a recording nightmare! :evil: I *ahem* sometimes get a little irritated when there’s background noise disrupting my recording session that’s out of my control.

But fortunately, your recordings still sounded fine in spite of the background activities. :)

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