Thanks. That's Milly 6 PL OK! and Mistake 11 PL OK!
In chapter 5, there are some missing lines at the end. Maybe you accidentally edited them out?
After what you've recorded, there should be the following:
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"But, David," gasped Milly, "it is impossible! They are not dressed—they will take cold—“
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"Oh, dearie," said Milly as she clasped Phoebe's hand, "we couldn't come without them—everything happened wrong. I know it's awful and I ought to take them right back now and—“
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"But let's hope they won't want to, David," laughed Milly, radiant with excitement.
I hope my file for Chapter 5 is not cut short on Google Drive. Let me know...