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Post by linny » September 15th, 2020, 1:39 pm

My mother's Christmas gift to the kids/grand-kids is absurdly time consuming and she didn't tell me about it until last month. Mon-Wed I've been helping her with her project. (I'm such a good elf. Decades of practice.) Thursday is my LV catch up day. I have the chapters downloaded. I won't forget about the project but I might not be timely during the first half of the week. :roll:

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Post by dlolso21 » September 15th, 2020, 11:35 pm

linny wrote:
September 15th, 2020, 1:39 pm
My mother's Christmas gift to the kids/grand-kids is absurdly time consuming and she didn't tell me about it until last month. Mon-Wed I've been helping her with her project. (I'm such a good elf. Decades of practice.) Thursday is my LV catch up day. I have the chapters downloaded. I won't forget about the project but I might not be timely during the first half of the week. :roll:
Be a good elf!! It will probably take me all week to edit. Your PL is much faster than my edit.

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Post by linny » September 16th, 2020, 3:38 pm

Chapter 2

This is a little confusing. I know it follows the color coding but it seems that's an error.

9:38 (Near the bottom of page 9) - “Fire!” is read by Tom but should be the Watchman or even the Narrator.

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Post by dlolso21 » September 16th, 2020, 4:26 pm

linny wrote:
September 16th, 2020, 3:38 pm
Chapter 2

This is a little confusing. I know it follows the color coding but it seems that's an error.

9:38 (Near the bottom of page 9) - “Fire!” is read by Tom but should be the Watchman or even the Narrator.
We didn’t have a watchman role so I asked him to read it. I didn’t anticipate the confusion, I will record the word.

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Post by linny » September 16th, 2020, 5:11 pm

:thumbs: Excellent.

I knew you needed another reader section in the catalog. :wink:

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Post by linny » September 17th, 2020, 5:14 am

Chapter 3

There was a word change by the narrator which caught my attention. I don't know if she's still around and willing to help. If not, I found it used in chapter 2. You might be able to copy/paste.

13:29 - It lingered day after day, with its still air, its far-sounding echoes, its hazy light and its smoky distances; and the brooding spirit of nature’s quiet rested down, for a brief but beautiful season, about the unquiet spirits of men.

Found in chapter 2 @ the bottom of page 10:
At the farther side of the room sat a short, slim, beardless man, with pale face and restless eyes, whom Tom recognized as having been in the mine with the visiting strikers the day Bennie was lost; and by a round centre table sat Lawyer Pleadwell, short and stout, with bristly mustache and a stubby nose on which rested a pair of gold-rimmed eye-glasses.

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Post by linny » September 17th, 2020, 6:19 am

Foreman chapter 5 is PL OK.

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Post by dlolso21 » September 17th, 2020, 9:09 am

linny wrote:
September 16th, 2020, 3:38 pm
Chapter 2

This is a little confusing. I know it follows the color coding but it seems that's an error.

9:38 (Near the bottom of page 9) - “Fire!” is read by Tom but should be the Watchman or even the Narrator.
Chapter 2 updated.

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Post by linny » September 17th, 2020, 9:42 am

Chapter 2 is spot check PL OK. :D

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Post by dlolso21 » September 19th, 2020, 7:05 am

linny wrote:
September 17th, 2020, 5:14 am
Chapter 3

There was a word change by the narrator which caught my attention. I don't know if she's still around and willing to help. If not, I found it used in chapter 2. You might be able to copy/paste.

13:29 - It lingered day after day, with its still air, its far-sounding echoes, its hazy light and its smoky distances; and the brooding spirit of nature’s quiet rested down, for a brief but beautiful season, about the unquiet spirits of men.

Found in chapter 2 @ the bottom of page 10:
At the farther side of the room sat a short, slim, beardless man, with pale face and restless eyes, whom Tom recognized as having been in the mine with the visiting strikers the day Bennie was lost; and by a round centre table sat Lawyer Pleadwell, short and stout, with bristly mustache and a stubby nose on which rested a pair of gold-rimmed eye-glasses.
Chapter 3 updated.

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Post by linny » September 19th, 2020, 7:12 am

dlolso21 wrote:
September 19th, 2020, 7:05 am
Chapter 3 updated.
Nice edit!

Spot check PL OK.

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Post by dlolso21 » September 20th, 2020, 2:39 am

Chapter 4 is ready for PL.

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Post by linny » September 22nd, 2020, 5:31 pm

I have this downloaded. I should be able to get to it before the weekend.

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Post by linny » September 25th, 2020, 6:51 am

dlolso21 wrote:
September 20th, 2020, 2:39 am
Chapter 4 is ready for PL.
Chapter 4 is PL OK. Tom sure has gotten himself into a mess. :shock:

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