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EnNar
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Post by EnNar » June 4th, 2020, 1:45 pm

Hello David,

Here are chapters 4 and 5 for Tom: (mm:ss.ss)
4 https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_tom_4_128kb.mp3 0:39.05
5 https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_tom_5_128kb.mp3 4:5.24

In chapter 5, I skipped this line on page 27: “Well, then, suppose you tell the rest of it.”
I also skipped this: "pointing his trembling forefinger to Rennie," which was in the middle of my big dialogue on pg 27.
I don't think that these are mine. Please let me know if there are corrections.

Best,
Navin :) 8-) :lol: :mrgreen:
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Post by Twinkle88 » June 4th, 2020, 2:45 pm

Help catalog a project five years in the making! The Count of Monte Cristo

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Post by dlolso21 » June 4th, 2020, 5:02 pm

EnNar wrote:
June 4th, 2020, 1:45 pm
Hello David,

Here are chapters 4 and 5 for Tom: (mm:ss.ss)
4 https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_tom_4_128kb.mp3 0:39.05
5 https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_tom_5_128kb.mp3 4:5.24

In chapter 5, I skipped this line on page 27: “Well, then, suppose you tell the rest of it.”
I also skipped this: "pointing his trembling forefinger to Rennie," which was in the middle of my big dialogue on pg 27.
I don't think that these are mine. Please let me know if there are corrections.

Best,
Navin :) 8-) :lol: :mrgreen:
Navin,

“Well, then, suppose you tell the rest of it.” does appear to belong to Lawyer Summons. (and has been recorded by Adam)

and

"pointing his trembling forefinger to Rennie," belongs to the Narrator. (and has been recorded by Sky)


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Post by dlolso21 » June 4th, 2020, 5:04 pm

Navin & Twinkle,

Thank you for your recordings, the MW has been updated.

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Post by dlolso21 » June 5th, 2020, 1:45 am

Twinkle,

Neighor is PL OK.

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Post by dlolso21 » June 5th, 2020, 2:22 am

Navin,

Tom Chapters 4 and 5 are PL OK.

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Post by EnNar » June 5th, 2020, 6:48 am

dlolso21 wrote:
June 5th, 2020, 2:22 am
Navin,

Tom Chapters 4 and 5 are PL OK.

David O
Thank you David. I haven't recorded my last two chapters yet, but I found this when reading through them: In Chapter 7, this line is marked as mine at the top of page 39: “I ha’ summat to say to ye,” he said. Then, with a glance at the sleeping boy, “Come ye up the airway a bit.”

I believe that is Jack Rennie's. :lol:
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Post by dlolso21 » June 5th, 2020, 7:12 am

Correct, that line does belong to Jack.

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Post by Andrewjames » June 5th, 2020, 3:07 pm

hi

please can i read Jack, sections 9-14?

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Post by dlolso21 » June 6th, 2020, 3:07 am

Andrewjames wrote:
June 5th, 2020, 3:07 pm
hi

please can i read Jack, sections 9-14?

andrew
Andrew,

Thank You for volunteering.

The MW has been updated.

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Post by dlolso21 » June 7th, 2020, 3:49 pm

Andrew,

Thank You, for Chapters 1, 2, and 4.

Chapter 1 - the last word "lad" is very very soft, can you re-record that last line

Chapter 2 - PL OK

Chapter 4 - PL OK

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Post by EnNar » June 7th, 2020, 7:21 pm

Dear David,

Here is Chapter 6 for Tom!
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_tom_6_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 4:27.81 (m:ss.ss)

Please let me know if I have to correct anything. Stay healthy and safe!

Best,
Navin :D :mrgreen: :shock: :lol:
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