~[Open - DR] The Blind Brother by Homer Green - dlo

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skyasimaru
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Post by skyasimaru » May 1st, 2020, 7:44 am

Good morning,

Link to chapter 7 below. Run time 15:48. Please let me know if there are any changes/corrections to be made. I will work on chapter 8 and the fixings to chapters 4 and 5 today. Thank you!

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_narrator_7_128kb.mp3

Respectfully,
Sky Asimaru

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Post by dlolso21 » May 1st, 2020, 9:27 am

Sky,

Thank you for Chapter 7.

If you want to wait until the end and just send in one file of extra lines, that is okay.

Due to the way I edit (as I PL) you don't need to do the extra work of inserting missing lines into a previous recording.

David O

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Post by dlolso21 » May 2nd, 2020, 10:14 pm

Sky,

PL Notes for Chapter 7

missing phrases (italicized portions below)

Then, flashing the light of his lamp into the boys’ faces, - This was mis-colored as something said by the "Jack Rennie" in the google document.

Then, after a pause, - This was mis-colored as something said by the "Bennie" in the google document.

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Post by alanmapstone » May 3rd, 2020, 12:11 am

Hi
Can I help out here by reading the lines of the District Attorney? In the text the lines for Lawyer Summons seem to be the same colour as the DA. Is he the same character and would you want me to read those lines?
alan
the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose

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Post by dlolso21 » May 3rd, 2020, 7:33 am

alanmapstone wrote:
May 3rd, 2020, 12:11 am
Hi
Can I help out here by reading the lines of the District Attorney? In the text the lines for Lawyer Summons seem to be the same colour as the DA. Is he the same character and would you want me to read those lines?
Alan,

Thank you for volunteering !!

Yes, Lawyer Summons is the District Attorney; you opposition is Lawyer Pleadwell, the defending attorney.

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Post by skyasimaru » May 6th, 2020, 7:15 pm

Hello,

Sorry for the delay. Here is the link to chapter 8. I wasn't sure how to end it aside from 'end of chapter 8,' but since it was the end of the book I also recorded a line about it being the end of the book as well; you can delete it if you do not need it.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_narrator_8_128kb.mp3
Record time: 20:10

I will record the missed lines in a file together as requested. Thank you for your diligent PL-ing!

Respectfully,
Sky Asimaru

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Post by dlolso21 » May 7th, 2020, 10:53 am

Sky,

Thank You, Chapter 8 is PL Ok and the end of book you recorded works well.

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Post by skyasimaru » May 8th, 2020, 4:09 pm

Good afternoon,

Here are the re-recorded lines for chapters 4, 5, and 7. Each line is read twice for variety. Please let me know if you have any questions or need anything else.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/blindbrother_narrator_readovers_128kb.mp3

Thank you for giving me this opportunity to record! I had a lot of fun with it. Until next time!
Respectfully,
Sky Asimaru

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Post by EnNar » May 10th, 2020, 4:03 pm

HI!

Trust you are well! Could I please claim Tom? I am a 13 yo male. Stay safe.

Best,
Navin (EnNar) :shock: 8-) :lol: :mrgreen:
–––Navin–––
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-Warren Buffett :9:

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Post by dlolso21 » May 10th, 2020, 8:36 pm

EnNar wrote:
May 10th, 2020, 4:03 pm
HI!

Trust you are well! Could I please claim Tom? I am a 13 yo male. Stay safe.

Best,
Navin (EnNar) :shock: 8-) :lol: :mrgreen:
Navin,

Thank you for volunteering! The MW has been updated.

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Post by EnNar » May 11th, 2020, 5:38 am

dlolso21 wrote:
May 10th, 2020, 8:36 pm
EnNar wrote:
May 10th, 2020, 4:03 pm
HI!

Trust you are well! Could I please claim Tom? I am a 13 yo male. Stay safe.

Best,
Navin (EnNar) :shock: 8-) :lol: :mrgreen:
Navin,

Thank you for volunteering! The MW has been updated.

David O
Thank you David. Recordings coming soon. :mrgreen:
–––Navin–––
"The happiest people do not necessarily have the best things. They simply appreciate the things they have."
-Warren Buffett :9:

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Post by EnNar » May 11th, 2020, 10:18 am

Hi David

Just was looking through the story. On page 27, this is among my big dialogue:

...an’ I stopped an’ listened. An’ then I heard a noise in under the loadin’-place, an’ then that man,” pointing his trembling forefinger to Rennie, “came out, a-kind o’ talkin’ to himself. An’ he said that ...

Bold portion probably should be narrator.

Thanks,
Navin
–––Navin–––
"The happiest people do not necessarily have the best things. They simply appreciate the things they have."
-Warren Buffett :9:

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Post by dlolso21 » May 11th, 2020, 10:43 pm

Navin,

Thank you for pointing that out. I have forwarded the information as a private message to the narrator.

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Post by alanmapstone » May 12th, 2020, 4:57 am

alan
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Post by EnNar » May 12th, 2020, 8:24 am

Hi!

This is at the end of page 40:

“I guess so,” answered Tom; “but you aint goin’ to die; we’re goin’ to get out—both of us.”

Im pretty sure it is my line, but it is marked as Jack Rennie's

Best,
Navin 8-)
–––Navin–––
"The happiest people do not necessarily have the best things. They simply appreciate the things they have."
-Warren Buffett :9:

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