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Post by EnNar » July 12th, 2019, 6:56 pm

elsieselwyn wrote:
July 12th, 2019, 6:42 pm
Doris, Chapter 4 PL OK :thumbs:
Woohoo! :thumbs: :clap:

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Post by EnNar » July 12th, 2019, 7:36 pm

HI again,

This is the completed Chapter 5 for Doris :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_05_128kb.mp3

Track Length:
6:44.53 (m:ss.ss)

Chapter 6 is on the way! :P :)

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 13th, 2019, 5:09 am

EnNar wrote:
July 12th, 2019, 7:36 pm
HI again,

This is the completed Chapter 5 for Doris :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_05_128kb.mp3

Track Length:
6:44.53 (m:ss.ss)

Chapter 6 is on the way! :P :)

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Wohoo!

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Post by EnNar » July 13th, 2019, 1:40 pm

Hello

This is the completed Chapter 6 and 7 for Doris :clap:
6:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_06_128kb.mp3
Track Length : 5:9.39 (m:ss.ss)

7:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_07_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 5:1.09 (m:ss.ss)

Chapter 8 on the way

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 13th, 2019, 2:25 pm

EnNar wrote:
July 13th, 2019, 1:40 pm
Hello

This is the completed Chapter 6 and 7 for Doris :clap:
6:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_06_128kb.mp3
Track Length : 5:9.39 (m:ss.ss)

7:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_07_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 5:1.09 (m:ss.ss)

Chapter 8 on the way

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Thank you! You’re on a roll :P

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 13th, 2019, 7:57 pm

Doris Chapter 5 and 6 PL OK :thumbs:

One PL Note for Chapter 7: @ 2:46 heard "breadspread" text says "bedspread"

Also, it's fine for these recordings, but I noticed that you had the sound of wind or breath going over your microphone which can sometimes be distracting. There is no need to rerecord of course, but for the later sections, if you are able, you might be able to decrease that sound by moving the microphone farther from your mouth or covering it with something like a sock. If it doesn't work out, that's fine but it's worth a try :D

Many thanks for all your hard work so far, Navin :9:

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 14th, 2019, 2:47 pm

PL Notes for Jane, Chapter 5:

0:21 thump (could you rerecord that sentence?)
1:00 dance cut off a tad
1:06 girls cut off a tad

Also, it doesn’t have to be for this recording, but could you give the voice credit as “Jane read by Alyssa”. When I have the Cast List at the beginning of the book, I will have each person’s voice credit for their part there and that format is the standard (and shortest) way to do so.

Great job on your first recording! :D :clap:

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 14th, 2019, 2:55 pm

Ruth Manning PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by EnNar » July 14th, 2019, 6:41 pm

elsieselwyn wrote:
July 13th, 2019, 7:57 pm
Doris Chapter 5 and 6 PL OK :thumbs:

One PL Note for Chapter 7: @ 2:46 heard "breadspread" text says "bedspread"

Also, it's fine for these recordings, but I noticed that you had the sound of wind or breath going over your microphone which can sometimes be distracting. There is no need to rerecord of course, but for the later sections, if you are able, you might be able to decrease that sound by moving the microphone farther from your mouth or covering it with something like a sock. If it doesn't work out, that's fine but it's worth a try :D

Many thanks for all your hard work so far, Navin :9:
Thank you Elsie! :P Here is the revised Chapter 7 for Doris:
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_07_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 4:59.26 (m:ss.ss)

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Post by EnNar » July 14th, 2019, 7:10 pm

Hi

here is Chapter 8 for Doris :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_08_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 3:27.52 (m:ss.ss)

thanks,
Navin (EnNar) :mrgreen:

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 15th, 2019, 7:57 am

Thanks, Navin!

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 15th, 2019, 7:58 am

Mrs. Leverett Chapter 1 PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by EnNar » July 17th, 2019, 5:42 pm

Hello

here is Chapter 9 for Doris :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_09_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 1:25.32 (m:ss.ss)

thanks,
Navin (EnNar) :P

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 17th, 2019, 8:28 pm

EnNar wrote:
July 17th, 2019, 5:42 pm
Hello

here is Chapter 9 for Doris :clap:

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/littlegirl_doris_09_128kb.mp3
Track Length: 1:25.32 (m:ss.ss)

thanks,
Navin (EnNar) :P
Thanks, Navin!

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Post by sadclown » July 17th, 2019, 8:28 pm

I'm interested in reading Aunt Priscilla's part. Though one of her lines in Chapter 1 will be hard to get out. :shock:
Jennifer

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