FULL, COMEDIC PLAY] Ann by Lechmere Worrall - dlo

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 13th, 2019, 1:55 pm

Ann Anning Act 1 PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 13th, 2019, 2:26 pm

EmmaHatton wrote:
June 12th, 2019, 11:08 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_2_128kb.mp3 here is ann act 2!
Here are my notes:

missed line 0:45 “I’m really pleased to meet the mother of so great an author.”

Misread line 2:00 text says “It would just sell the book like anything, Mr. Hargraves”

8:58 bumped microphone

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Post by EmmaHatton » June 13th, 2019, 3:30 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_2_128kb.mp3 So I fixed act 2 for Ann, but after listening for the mic bump a few times, I wasn't quite sure where it was, so if I changed it incorrectly, I'd be happy to fix it again, thanks.

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 13th, 2019, 3:33 pm

EmmaHatton wrote:
June 13th, 2019, 3:30 pm
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_2_128kb.mp3 So I fixed act 2 for Ann, but after listening for the mic bump a few times, I wasn't quite sure where it was, so if I changed it incorrectly, I'd be happy to fix it again, thanks.
You got it! Ann Anning Act 2 PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by EmmaHatton » June 17th, 2019, 11:36 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_3_128kb.mp3 ann act 3.
(PS I'll be back next week to fix the mistakes, thanks)

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 17th, 2019, 12:40 pm

EmmaHatton wrote:
June 17th, 2019, 11:36 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_3_128kb.mp3 ann act 3.
(PS I'll be back next week to fix the mistakes, thanks)
Ok - sounds good!

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 18th, 2019, 6:49 pm

EmmaHatton wrote:
June 17th, 2019, 11:36 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_3_128kb.mp3 ann act 3.
(PS I'll be back next week to fix the mistakes, thanks)
PL Notes for Ann Anning Act 3:

1:15 please read "read" like "red" since it's in the past tense here

5:07 missed line: Mrs. Hargraves - I'd better be going

9:24 missed 2 lines: Papa, potatoes, poultry, prunes, and prisms!(Repeats in half whisper)Papa, potatoes, poultry, prunes, and prisms.

16:16 missed line: Billy!!! Ann, you're no coward!

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » June 20th, 2019, 4:25 pm

Campbell
Constructive criticism always welcome

Readers wanted: The Cliff-Dwellers

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 20th, 2019, 4:39 pm

Thanks!

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Post by EmmaHatton » June 24th, 2019, 10:30 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_3_128kb.mp3 alright, I was finally able to fix those.

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 24th, 2019, 10:49 am

EmmaHatton wrote:
June 24th, 2019, 10:30 am
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_annanning_3_128kb.mp3 alright, I was finally able to fix those.
Thank you!

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 29th, 2019, 5:29 am

Ann Anning Act 3 PL OK :thumbs:

Edward Hargraves Act 2:

Could you read the OMNES lines on pg. 52 and 53? Everything else is great!

8:48 OMNES: A headline? (pg. 52)
9:13 OMNES: Tempted! (pg. 53)

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » June 30th, 2019, 4:04 pm

elsieselwyn wrote:
June 29th, 2019, 5:29 am
Ann Anning Act 3 PL OK :thumbs:

Edward Hargraves Act 2:

Could you read the OMNES lines on pg. 52 and 53? Everything else is great!

8:48 OMNES: A headline? (pg. 52)
9:13 OMNES: Tempted! (pg. 53)
How's this? Didn't know that omnes meant all.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_edward_2_128kb.mp3
13:53
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Readers wanted: The Cliff-Dwellers

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Post by elsieselwyn » June 30th, 2019, 5:12 pm

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
June 30th, 2019, 4:04 pm
elsieselwyn wrote:
June 29th, 2019, 5:29 am
Ann Anning Act 3 PL OK :thumbs:

Edward Hargraves Act 2:

Could you read the OMNES lines on pg. 52 and 53? Everything else is great!

8:48 OMNES: A headline? (pg. 52)
9:13 OMNES: Tempted! (pg. 53)
How's this? Didn't know that omnes meant all.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/ann_edward_2_128kb.mp3
13:53
Thank you!

They’re just trying to trick you - OMNES is latin for all :wink:

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Post by elsieselwyn » July 1st, 2019, 12:00 pm

Edward Hargraves Act 2 PL OK :thumbs:

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