OPEN[PLAY]The Tender Husband by Steele - thw

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Post by Pinklady77 » September 9th, 2019, 8:32 am

Hello,

Here is Jenny from Act 3, duration: 0:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

Lola Janie

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Post by Kitty » September 9th, 2019, 9:37 am

Pinklady77 wrote:
September 9th, 2019, 8:32 am
Here is Jenny from Act 3, duration: 0:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3
thank you, Lola, for the quick turn-around and I really like your portrayal of the maid. Love the accent too, the tinge of cockney gives her a bit of a "lower-class" vibe which is perfect here. :thumbs:

All the lines are in and perfectly delivered, I only have one PL note to add:

> at 0:01: for the voice credit, please always use the whole description of the character, you can see it in full in the MW. Here: "Jenny, maid to Mrs. Clerimont, read by Lola Janie"

> also, since you have to reupload anyway, maybe a round of noise-cleaning wouldn't be amiss, as the background noise is really very loud :? do you use Audacity ? It's really easy to clean with that program, I can walk you through it if you need help :)

Thank you

Sonia

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Post by Pinklady77 » September 9th, 2019, 11:10 am

Kitty wrote:
September 9th, 2019, 9:37 am
Pinklady77 wrote:
September 9th, 2019, 8:32 am
Here is Jenny from Act 3, duration: 0:46
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3
thank you, Lola, for the quick turn-around and I really like your portrayal of the maid. Love the accent too, the tinge of cockney gives her a bit of a "lower-class" vibe which is perfect here. :thumbs:

All the lines are in and perfectly delivered, I only have one PL note to add:

> at 0:01: for the voice credit, please always use the whole description of the character, you can see it in full in the MW. Here: "Jenny, maid to Mrs. Clerimont, read by Lola Janie"

> also, since you have to reupload anyway, maybe a round of noise-cleaning wouldn't be amiss, as the background noise is really very loud :? do you use Audacity ? It's really easy to clean with that program, I can walk you through it if you need help :)

Thank you

Sonia
Hi Sonia,

I think I forgot to noise clean, my apologies. That has been done and I made the correction to the character name in the beginning as noted above.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

Thank you

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Post by Kitty » September 10th, 2019, 4:26 am

Pinklady77 wrote:
September 9th, 2019, 11:10 am
I think I forgot to noise clean, my apologies. That has been done and I made the correction to the character name in the beginning as noted above.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusbans_jenny_3_128kb.mp3
:hmm: did you maybe forget to upload the file (or upload the previous file again ?) Because the noise is still the same and the voice credit still wrong. Could you try reuploading once more maybe ? An idea would be to call the file differently (maybe correct the typo "husband" instead of "husbans") so we can be sure it's the new file you're uploading.

Thank you

Sonia

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Post by Pinklady77 » September 10th, 2019, 7:43 am

Here is the corrected file for Jenny the Maid.


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_jenny_3_128kb.mp3

Lola J

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Post by Kitty » September 10th, 2019, 7:57 am

Pinklady77 wrote:
September 10th, 2019, 7:43 am
Here is the corrected file for Jenny the Maid.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_jenny_3_128kb.mp3
thank you, yes now it's all correct and PL ok. Don't know what happened with the other file. But all is good now. Thanks !

Sonia

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Post by silverquill » September 17th, 2019, 9:58 am

Well, for some reason I thought I had done this one, but obviously I was wrong.
So, apologies for getting it in late.

Such a skinflint -- it's all about the money . . . .

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_tipkin_1_128kb.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/tenderhusband_tipkin_5_128kb.mp3

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Post by ToddHW » September 17th, 2019, 10:17 am

Thank you.

Todd

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Post by Kitty » September 18th, 2019, 1:26 am

silverquill wrote:
September 17th, 2019, 9:58 am
Such a skinflint -- it's all about the money . . . .
:shock: :lol: indeed, this guy is quite the money-bag hunter. I loved the final scene where he gets insulted with all kinds of names. :mrgreen: Excellent job, Larry, and totally PL ok. Thank you so much !

Only Captain Clerimont left and then it's a wrap :9:

Sonia

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