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Post by cowguy02 » July 8th, 2019, 8:34 am

ej400 wrote:
July 8th, 2019, 7:54 am
PL notes for David/Mr. Leverett

You say "Gentleman, David, Mr. Eder" should be "Gentleman, David Mr. Leverett".

@ 1:13 You say "Sure it looks like a snail" should be "Sure it looks like a sail". Big difference :lol: <laughing> Maybe there's snail on the sail? :mrgreen: <mrgreen>

@ 1:20 wrongly colored lines "Then for several minutes all was silent." Can you please remove that as it is the narrator's lines?

You forgot your lines for L'envoi :shock:

Good reading Luke, you put great character into your character!
There is only one Lenovi line. Let me check and make sure it’s there :lol:

I’ll get right on those changes.
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Post by bhavya » July 8th, 2019, 8:47 am

ej400 wrote:
July 8th, 2019, 7:29 am
I can do Father and Bruce so were full. Might change my voice a little bit for both :D <smile>
Thank you!

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Post by bhavya » July 8th, 2019, 8:50 am

Also, its Mr/Mrs. Everett :lol:

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Post by bhavya » July 8th, 2019, 8:54 am

silverquill wrote:
July 8th, 2019, 8:25 am
ej400 wrote:
May 30th, 2019, 5:49 am
Larry

Chapters 5, 6, 7 & 8 are all PL OK!

Chapter 3 PL notes:

@ 1:05 Missing lines “That's so,”

L'envoi PL notes:

Text says: “the land that is very far off;”, I heard "the land is not very far off".

Also, there's not a lot of silence between your lines... but it's enough that I'm sure bhavya can manage.

Realized I haven't given you the corrections I recorded.
I tried for three seconds of silence between lines, which is what I've always done for plays and DR's.
If I need to change this for your project, I will. Just let me know.


"I tried for three seconds of silence between lines, which is what I've always done for plays and DR's."
Its alright :)

I'm a little confused; are these the edited files Larry?
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_03_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_lenvoi_128kb.mp3

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Post by ej400 » July 8th, 2019, 9:23 am

bhavya wrote:
July 8th, 2019, 8:54 am
"I tried for three seconds of silence between lines, which is what I've always done for plays and DR's." Its alright :)

I'm a little confused; are these the edited files Larry?
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_03_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_larry_lenvoi_128kb.mp3
I'm guessing so, because they are PL OK!

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Post by silverquill » July 8th, 2019, 12:28 pm

Sorry, I must have deleted one of the end quotes. But, yes, these are the corrected files. Looks as if you got them.
Thanks, Elijah.

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Post by bhavya » July 8th, 2019, 9:29 pm

Awesome! Thank you both!

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Post by cowguy02 » July 8th, 2019, 10:45 pm

ej400 wrote:
July 8th, 2019, 7:54 am
PL notes for David/Mr. Leverett

You say "Gentleman, David, Mr. Eder" should be "Gentleman, David Mr. Leverett".

@ 1:13 You say "Sure it looks like a snail" should be "Sure it looks like a sail". Big difference :lol: <laughing> Maybe there's snail on the sail? :mrgreen: <mrgreen>

@ 1:20 wrongly colored lines "Then for several minutes all was silent." Can you please remove that as it is the narrator's lines?

You forgot your lines for L'envoi :shock:

Good reading Luke, you put great character into your character!
here is the fixed file. https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_gentleman:david:_mr._everett_4_128kb_.mp3

I checked and the lines for lenovi were there. maybe they were just missed?
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Post by ej400 » July 12th, 2019, 8:12 am

Gentleman, David, Mr. Everett is PL OK!

bhavya, I didn't put the new link in the MW.

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Post by ej400 » July 12th, 2019, 8:13 am

...This also means that Chapters 7, 8 & l'envoi are ready to edit!

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Post by bhavya » July 12th, 2019, 9:09 am

ej400 wrote:
July 12th, 2019, 8:12 am
Gentleman, David, Mr. Everett is PL OK!

bhavya, I didn't put the new link in the MW.
Okay,I'll update it.

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Post by bhavya » July 12th, 2019, 9:10 am

ej400 wrote:
July 12th, 2019, 8:13 am
...This also means that Chapters 7, 8 & l'envoi are ready to edit!
Awesome! I'll get to it soon.

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Post by bhavya » July 12th, 2019, 9:10 am

ej400 wrote:
July 12th, 2019, 7:22 am
Dick is ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/courage_dick_6_128kb.mp3 -1:07
I'll PL this tomorrow.

EDIT: PL OK! :thumbs:

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Post by ej400 » July 16th, 2019, 9:31 am

Father and Bruce are ready for PL.

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