[FULL] Courage by Ruth Ogden (Dramatic Reading) - tg

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Post by ej400 » July 29th, 2019, 11:41 am

Chapter 1 PL notes:

I thought I'd note where the missing narrator lines are, as there are no other PL notes:

@ 6:49 Missing narrator lines "—proud to have remembered the proper word and evidently comprehending that the rite was a binding one."

@ 7:39 Missing narrator lines "and although she did not in the least understand it, Baby felt somehow that that was a beautiful reason, and as her father lifted her up in his arms, gave him a tight little hug and was perfectly satisfied." Gutenberg forgot the quotation marks for the father to stop speaking, and the narrator to continue.

Otherwise, this chapter was really nicely done!

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Post by ej400 » July 29th, 2019, 3:05 pm

PL notes for Chapter 2:

Just that there are like 8 seconds at the end of the recording. Can you please remove 3 seconds at the end and then it will be PL OK?

Nice work on all the editing so far!

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Post by ej400 » August 19th, 2019, 8:03 am

Chapter 3 is PL OK! There were a couple times where there wasn't much silence after the narrator spoke, and then Larry's lines were next. It's alright though, you did such an awesome job on the editing!

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Post by bhavya » August 29th, 2019, 10:20 pm

ej400 wrote:
July 29th, 2019, 3:05 pm
PL notes for Chapter 2:

Just that there are like 8 seconds at the end of the recording. Can you please remove 3 seconds at the end and then it will be PL OK?

Nice work on all the editing so far!
Thank you Elijah! Will do.

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Post by bhavya » August 29th, 2019, 10:23 pm

ej400 wrote:
August 19th, 2019, 8:03 am
Chapter 3 is PL OK! There were a couple times where there wasn't much silence after the narrator spoke, and then Larry's lines were next. It's alright though, you did such an awesome job on the editing!
Thank you so much!

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Post by bhavya » August 29th, 2019, 10:24 pm

Elijah,
You've marked chapter 4 as PL OK; is it?

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Post by ej400 » August 30th, 2019, 9:13 am

bhavya wrote:
August 29th, 2019, 10:24 pm
Elijah,
You've marked chapter 4 as PL OK; is it?
Whoops, I must have marked it PL OK instead of Chapter 3.

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Post by bhavya » August 31st, 2019, 4:55 am

ej400 wrote:
August 30th, 2019, 9:13 am
bhavya wrote:
August 29th, 2019, 10:24 pm
Elijah,
You've marked chapter 4 as PL OK; is it?
Whoops, I must have marked it PL OK instead of Chapter 3.
Thats okay

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