COMPLETE[PLAY]The "Mind The Paint" Girl by Pinero - thw

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Post by PetitPoiSon » April 24th, 2019, 8:30 am

Bonjour !
May I claim Gabrielle Kato please?
A bientôt
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Post by Kitty » April 24th, 2019, 8:44 am

PetitPoiSon wrote:
April 24th, 2019, 8:30 am
May I claim Gabrielle Kato please?
you may, thank you so much, Pauline :9:

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Post by DuckTD » April 24th, 2019, 2:19 pm

Thank you so much for your feedback and coaching, Sonia! :D
I'll get to work on Act 3.

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Post by DuckTD » April 24th, 2019, 5:46 pm

Here are Mrs. Upjohn's lines for Act 3. The clip is only 1 minute and 48 seconds.
Tracy :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_3_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kitty » April 24th, 2019, 11:34 pm

DuckTD wrote:
April 24th, 2019, 5:46 pm
Here are Mrs. Upjohn's lines for Act 3. The clip is only 1 minute and 48 seconds.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_3_128kb.mp3
excellent small scene, Tracy :thumbs: I like the part where she is miffed that Lily is not taking her into her confidence. You're good at pouting :mrgreen:

Nothing missing but the background noise is quite disturbing. Did you forget to do a round of noise-cleaning here ? Since there is nothing else missing, I guess I can mark it PL ok and make a note for Todd in the MW, but for the next act, please think about noise-cleaning ;) It makes it more easy for my ears to listen to.

Thank you !

Todd: I saw that Mrs Upjohn is not in Act 2, so I will delete that section in the MW.

Sonia

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Post by ToddHW » April 25th, 2019, 6:29 am

Thank you.

Todd

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Post by DuckTD » April 25th, 2019, 4:55 pm

You're good at pouting :mrgreen:

Haha! That makes me laugh! :D

I have uploaded a new version with the noise cleaning applied. (Learned something new today.) :thumbs:


https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_mrsupjohn_3_128kb.mp3

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Post by Kitty » April 26th, 2019, 12:46 am

DuckTD wrote:
April 25th, 2019, 4:55 pm
I have uploaded a new version with the noise cleaning applied. (Learned something new today.) :thumbs:
awww thank you for that. This will save Todd some time in the end and yes, it definitely sounds better now. :thumbs: PL ok definitely now.

And noise-cleaning is an important tool and quite easy to do in Audacity (are you using that program ?) I think many, if not most of us use it in each recording.

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » April 26th, 2019, 5:02 pm

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Readers wanted: The Cliff-Dwellers

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Post by ToddHW » April 26th, 2019, 6:25 pm

Thank you.

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Post by DuckTD » April 26th, 2019, 8:45 pm

And noise-cleaning is an important tool and quite easy to do in Audacity (are you using that program ?) I think many, if not most of us use it in each recording.

Yes, I am using Audacity. And, it's true. Noise cleaning is super easy and effective. Thanks for pushing me to figure it out. :thumbs:

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Post by Kitty » April 27th, 2019, 8:04 am

oh quite a change in character here from the beginning of the 3rd Act to the ending. During his candid confession of his character and background story with Lily, I started to pity the poor guy. If it was a ruse to make her fall for him again, it was craftily done ;)

Excellent job here, Campbell and nothing missing I think. Can be marked PL ok straight away.

Thanks

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Post by Foon » April 27th, 2019, 12:21 pm

Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!


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Post by leanneyauyau » April 28th, 2019, 4:40 am

Leanne (leanneyauyau) :9:
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Post by ToddHW » April 28th, 2019, 6:15 am

Thank you both.

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