COMPLETE[PLAY]The "Mind The Paint" Girl by Pinero - thw

LexHankins · Post by **LexHankins** » May 5th, 2019, 5:25 pm

Nita Trevenna from Act 2 is ready for PL. Length is 1:50.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_nitatrevenna_2_128kb.mp3
(Sneak peek is at https://instaud.io/3DOO .)

Feedback is, as always, most welcome. In particular, is it too noisy? My environment is much quieter now (peaks at -51 dB); I'm hoping to get a better sound if I forgo the noise filter.

Thanks for volunteering, everyone!

Post by **ToddHW** » May 5th, 2019, 5:54 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » May 5th, 2019, 11:46 pm

LexHankins wrote: ↑May 5th, 2019, 5:25 pmNita Trevenna from Act 2 is ready for PL. Length is 1:50.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_nitatrevenna_2_128kb.mp3
Feedback is, as always, most welcome. In particular, is it too noisy? My environment is much quieter now (peaks at -51 dB); I'm hoping to get a better sound if I forgo the noise filter.

a wonderful job, Lex, and I really have to marvel at the almost uncanny ability you have to change your vocal range so much.

It was really amazingly well done. Also: nothing missing, so I can mark this file PL ok immediately.

Thanks for participating here, and I hope to hear you soon again.

As for the noise, it didn't strike me as too disturbing. Nothing to change there.

Sonia

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » May 6th, 2019, 9:51 am

May I read Morris Cooling?

Post by **Kitty** » May 6th, 2019, 11:18 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑May 6th, 2019, 9:51 amMay I read Morris Cooling?

of course you may, glad to have you in here as well, Alan

Looking forward to this ! Please remember to include some of the "Men" lines (when appropriate that Morris would be in the group)

Sonia

Foon · Post by **Foon** » May 6th, 2019, 12:35 pm

Here's Lily act 4!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_lilyparadell_4_128kb.mp3
15:15

Post by **ToddHW** » May 6th, 2019, 1:12 pm

Thank you.

Remember that you have PL notes on Act 1, please.

Thanks, Todd

Foon · Post by **Foon** » May 6th, 2019, 1:25 pm

ToddHW wrote: ↑May 6th, 2019, 1:12 pm Thank you.

Remember that you have PL notes on Act 1, please.

Thanks, Todd

Definitely! I was away from home (and my mic) and just got back today, so I'll get those fixed soon. This was just editing backlog

Post by **ToddHW** » May 6th, 2019, 1:31 pm

Great.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » May 7th, 2019, 2:20 am

Foon wrote: ↑May 6th, 2019, 12:35 pmHere's Lily act 4!

well you had a big sobbing scene here, Foon

so many different versions of "oh" I was hearing just now.

And I absolutely loved to hear you muffled by a pillow. Did you really mumble into a pillow there for effect ? It sounds great, but is still easy to understand.

I have a few small corrections to note:

> at 0:04: “Either; I don’t care.” – you forgot “either”

> at 10:26: if I may make a pronunciation suggestion here: the country Rhodesia has the middle syllable voiced as well: so Rho-dee-sian, not Road-sian (later in the act you pronounced it correctly)

> at 11:11: “they would – they would” – I think the initial “they” is cut off by mistake

> at 11:27-11:29: repeat of “Oh”, do you have any preference ? otherwise you can cut these out, as they are repeated a bit further

excellent job ! Thanks. This was really a big role.

Sonia

Foon · Post by **Foon** » May 7th, 2019, 3:17 am

Thanks Sonia for the notes!
Here are act 1 and 4 with corrections:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_lilyparadell_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_lilyparadell_1_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » May 7th, 2019, 3:37 am

Foon wrote: ↑May 7th, 2019, 3:17 am Thanks Sonia for the notes!
Here are act 1 and 4 with corrections:

all of Lily now PL ok !!! Thanks so much, Foon.

Sonia

Iunta4Ios · Post by **Iunta4Ios** » May 8th, 2019, 1:26 am

Kitty wrote: ↑May 4th, 2019, 3:45 am
Iunta4Ios wrote: ↑May 4th, 2019, 3:42 am I would like to claim: 7 Luigi (Maître d’hôtel at Catani’s Restaurant), Act 2
Grazie mille!
Pier
ottimo, Pier !
This is also your first participation in a drama play, so please read through the tips I posted right above your post, you can read all about the special rules for drama. viewtopic.php?p=1585916#p1585916

Have fun.

Sonia

Sonia,
I have uploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_luigi_02_128kb.mp3 (2:00 minutes)

Let me know how it is.

Luigi (alias Pier)

Post by **Kitty** » May 8th, 2019, 1:34 am

Iunta4Ios wrote: ↑May 8th, 2019, 1:26 amSonia,
I have uploaded:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_luigi_02_128kb.mp3 (2:00 minutes)
Let me know how it is.
Luigi (alias Pier)

this is absolutely great, Luigi...I mean, Pier.

I'm thrilled to have the genuine Italian accent here for this role, so it's wonderful that you offered for this part. And you play an absolutely good-humoured and charming maître d'hôtel here.

Also love the little chuckles here and there. Makes it all very lively.

No lines missing, all perfect ! PL ok.

Excellent first role in a play. Hopefully more to come.

Thanks

Sonia

WiltedScribe · Post by **WiltedScribe** » May 15th, 2019, 10:04 pm

Presenting the Viscount Farncombe, in all his bashful, awkward glory.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_farncombe_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_farncombe_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_farncombe_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/mindthepaintgirl_farncombe_4_128kb.mp3