COMPLETE [PLAY] The Vegetable by F. Scott Fitzgerald - thw

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Post by bhavya » February 4th, 2019, 4:37 am


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Post by Kitty » February 4th, 2019, 5:23 am

bhavya wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 4:37 am
Here is Charlotte: Act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_charlottefrost_1_128kb.mp3
ok, Tomas, I decided to be DPL after all, since nobody else is vying for the job.

That gave me the wonderful opportunity to listen to this excellent performance, Bhavya :9: wow you are one hell of a snappish Charlotte. I loved the characterization, you so totally own the scene. I know that Tomas can be just as snappish back, so your bickering dialogue will be brilliant together. 8-)

No parts missing as far as I can tell. Everything wonderfully acted out. PL ok.

Just one thing:

> please include voice credit at the beginning of Act 2, since you forgot it here: “Charlotte Frost, read by Bhavya

thank you, looking forward to the next act :)

Sonia

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Post by Foon » February 4th, 2019, 9:33 am

Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!


Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian

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Post by Kitty » February 4th, 2019, 12:34 pm

Foon wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 9:33 am
Here's Doris, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3
ah and the other female of the play 8-) also a very good characterization, Foon. :thumbs: You play the jaded débutante who is always eager to be hip quite well. This play will really be great, I can feel that much already. :9:

You have missed a couple of lines this time:

> at about 0:41: (p. 24) missing lines: "He'd drink anything. Anything he could get his hands on. He used to drink all these mixtures and then come round to see me."

> at about 4:35: (p. 28) missing lines: "How's everything else been going around here ?"

Great job ! Looking forward to the next act. Thanks !

Sonia

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Post by ChuckW » February 4th, 2019, 2:38 pm

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Post by WiltedScribe » February 4th, 2019, 3:51 pm

Thanks, Chuck! Sonia will give that a listen tomorrow.

(Oh, and many thanks for agreeing to DPL, Sonia - you're a lifesaver!)
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Post by Kitty » February 5th, 2019, 4:57 am

ChuckW wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 2:38 pm
Here's Act I of Fishy-fish!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_fish_01.mp3
hehe, well done, Chuck. Fish starts out quite jovial but rapidly becomes miffed with Jerry's bad jokes. I think the end of the scene is quite surreal, Jerry probably drifting in and out of alcohol fantasy while Fish is oblivious to this. Excellent portrayal. Now get ready to become a senator :lol: (I think Fish will be senator if I'm not mistaken)

PL ok, in any case. :thumbs: I only noticed the volume is around 83 dB only, but I'll make a note for the editor.

Thanks

Sonia

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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 5th, 2019, 7:45 am

I would be honored to help finish by reading the Third Senator!
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Post by WiltedScribe » February 5th, 2019, 8:19 am

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
February 5th, 2019, 7:45 am
I would be honored to help finish by reading the Third Senator!
Thank you, Campbell!

And with that, we're full. :9:
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Post by lymiewithpurpose » February 5th, 2019, 5:16 pm

Got my piece recorded! Let me know if I missed anything!

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_thirdsenator_2_128kb.mp3
0:30
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Post by Kitty » February 6th, 2019, 2:23 am

lymiewithpurpose wrote:
February 5th, 2019, 5:16 pm
Got my piece recorded! Let me know if I missed anything!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_thirdsenator_2_128kb.mp3
"Irish-Poland" made me giggle. :mrgreen:

Thank you, Campbell, as far as I can see, that was all for the Senators. They only seem to appear in group. All perfectly PL ok. :)

Sonia

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Post by Foon » February 6th, 2019, 6:12 am

Kitty wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 12:34 pm
Foon wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 9:33 am
Here's Doris, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3
ah and the other female of the play 8-) also a very good characterization, Foon. :thumbs: You play the jaded débutante who is always eager to be hip quite well. This play will really be great, I can feel that much already. :9:

You have missed a couple of lines this time:

> at about 0:41: (p. 24) missing lines: "He'd drink anything. Anything he could get his hands on. He used to drink all these mixtures and then come round to see me."

> at about 4:35: (p. 28) missing lines: "How's everything else been going around here ?"

Great job ! Looking forward to the next act. Thanks !

Sonia
Ahhh they were hiding behind narrator lines :lol:

Here is the new file with missing lines included: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3 8:13
Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!


Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian

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Post by Kitty » February 6th, 2019, 6:18 am

Foon wrote:
February 6th, 2019, 6:12 am
Ahhh they were hiding behind narrator lines :lol:
indeed, always beware the narrator ;)

thank you, all PL ok now

Sonia

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Post by bhavya » February 6th, 2019, 10:29 am

Kitty wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 5:23 am
bhavya wrote:
February 4th, 2019, 4:37 am
Here is Charlotte: Act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_charlottefrost_1_128kb.mp3
ok, Tomas, I decided to be DPL after all, since nobody else is vying for the job.

That gave me the wonderful opportunity to listen to this excellent performance, Bhavya :9: wow you are one hell of a snappish Charlotte. I loved the characterization, you so totally own the scene. I know that Tomas can be just as snappish back, so your bickering dialogue will be brilliant together. 8-)

No parts missing as far as I can tell. Everything wonderfully acted out. PL ok.

Just one thing:

> please include voice credit at the beginning of Act 2, since you forgot it here: “Charlotte Frost, read by Bhavya

thank you, looking forward to the next act :)

Sonia
Thank you so much! Here is act 2.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_charlottefrost_2_128kb.mp3

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Post by pschempf » February 6th, 2019, 1:45 pm

Here is the Honorable :roll: Chief Justice Fossile -

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_fossile_2_128kb.mp3
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