COMPLETE [PLAY] The Vegetable by F. Scott Fitzgerald - thw
ok, Tomas, I decided to be DPL after all, since nobody else is vying for the job.bhavya wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 4:37 am Here is Charlotte: Act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_charlottefrost_1_128kb.mp3
That gave me the wonderful opportunity to listen to this excellent performance, Bhavya wow you are one hell of a snappish Charlotte. I loved the characterization, you so totally own the scene. I know that Tomas can be just as snappish back, so your bickering dialogue will be brilliant together.
No parts missing as far as I can tell. Everything wonderfully acted out. PL ok.
Just one thing:
> please include voice credit at the beginning of Act 2, since you forgot it here: “Charlotte Frost, read by Bhavya”
thank you, looking forward to the next act
Sonia
Here's Doris, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3
Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
ah and the other female of the play also a very good characterization, Foon. You play the jaded débutante who is always eager to be hip quite well. This play will really be great, I can feel that much already.Foon wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 9:33 amHere's Doris, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3
You have missed a couple of lines this time:
> at about 0:41: (p. 24) missing lines: "He'd drink anything. Anything he could get his hands on. He used to drink all these mixtures and then come round to see me."
> at about 4:35: (p. 28) missing lines: "How's everything else been going around here ?"
Great job ! Looking forward to the next act. Thanks !
Sonia
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Thanks, Chuck! Sonia will give that a listen tomorrow.
(Oh, and many thanks for agreeing to DPL, Sonia - you're a lifesaver!)
(Oh, and many thanks for agreeing to DPL, Sonia - you're a lifesaver!)
Tomas Peter
hehe, well done, Chuck. Fish starts out quite jovial but rapidly becomes miffed with Jerry's bad jokes. I think the end of the scene is quite surreal, Jerry probably drifting in and out of alcohol fantasy while Fish is oblivious to this. Excellent portrayal. Now get ready to become a senator (I think Fish will be senator if I'm not mistaken)ChuckW wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 2:38 pmHere's Act I of Fishy-fish!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_fish_01.mp3
PL ok, in any case. I only noticed the volume is around 83 dB only, but I'll make a note for the editor.
Thanks
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I would be honored to help finish by reading the Third Senator!
Campbell
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Thank you, Campbell!lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑February 5th, 2019, 7:45 am I would be honored to help finish by reading the Third Senator!
And with that, we're full.
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Got my piece recorded! Let me know if I missed anything!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_thirdsenator_2_128kb.mp3
0:30
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_thirdsenator_2_128kb.mp3
0:30
Campbell
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"Irish-Poland" made me giggle.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑February 5th, 2019, 5:16 pm Got my piece recorded! Let me know if I missed anything!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_thirdsenator_2_128kb.mp3
Thank you, Campbell, as far as I can see, that was all for the Senators. They only seem to appear in group. All perfectly PL ok.
Sonia
Ahhh they were hiding behind narrator linesKitty wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 12:34 pmah and the other female of the play also a very good characterization, Foon. You play the jaded débutante who is always eager to be hip quite well. This play will really be great, I can feel that much already.Foon wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 9:33 amHere's Doris, Act 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3
You have missed a couple of lines this time:
> at about 0:41: (p. 24) missing lines: "He'd drink anything. Anything he could get his hands on. He used to drink all these mixtures and then come round to see me."
> at about 4:35: (p. 28) missing lines: "How's everything else been going around here ?"
Great job ! Looking forward to the next act. Thanks !
Sonia
Here is the new file with missing lines included: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_doris_1_128kb.mp3 8:13
Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
Thank you so much! Here is act 2.Kitty wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 5:23 amok, Tomas, I decided to be DPL after all, since nobody else is vying for the job.bhavya wrote: ↑February 4th, 2019, 4:37 am Here is Charlotte: Act 1
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_charlottefrost_1_128kb.mp3
That gave me the wonderful opportunity to listen to this excellent performance, Bhavya wow you are one hell of a snappish Charlotte. I loved the characterization, you so totally own the scene. I know that Tomas can be just as snappish back, so your bickering dialogue will be brilliant together.
No parts missing as far as I can tell. Everything wonderfully acted out. PL ok.
Just one thing:
> please include voice credit at the beginning of Act 2, since you forgot it here: “Charlotte Frost, read by Bhavya”
thank you, looking forward to the next act
Sonia
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_charlottefrost_2_128kb.mp3
Here is the Honorable Chief Justice Fossile -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_fossile_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/vegetable_fossile_2_128kb.mp3
Fritz
"A small daily task, if it be really daily, will beat the labors of a spasmodic Hercules."
Trollope
"A small daily task, if it be really daily, will beat the labors of a spasmodic Hercules."
Trollope