COMPLETE[PLAY]A Little Bit of Fluff by Walter W. Ellis - thw
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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/ittlebitoffluff_pamela_1_128kb.mp3 oops, my mind must had read over it, here is what I hop to be the absolutely perfect version.
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All better, thank you! Looking forward to act 2.
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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_pamela_2_128kb.mp3 fist attempt at act 2
Thank you.EmmaHatton wrote: ↑January 5th, 2019, 5:22 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_pamela_2_128kb.mp3 fist attempt at act 2
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Nice job, Emma. I love how Mrs. Ayers enters into the money-grubbing scheme of her husband's! A few things to take care of here.
5:40 "If you come any nearer...." This line belongs to Tully. You can cut it if you wish, to make Todd's job easier when editing time comes, but it's not really that big of a deal.
7:44 Missing line: "This is our patient, doctor."
8:00 Two missing lines: "A pity to wake him, don’t you think?" followed by "This is the best sleep he’s had for weeks."
8:09 Missing line: "Oh, don’t wake him, please doctor."
14:07 Missing line: "Excuse me a moment."
15:30 Line is: "It's Mr. Trippett." You left out the 'r' from his name: Tippett (Again, I'll leave this one to Todd for a ruling. You could make a case that this is a different name, or then maybe Pamela just wasn't paying attention and got it wrong. Who could blame her, with all of the shenanigans her husband gets into?)
15:50 Same thing again with Tippett/Trippett
16:05 Tippett again
16:20 Tippett again
5:40 "If you come any nearer...." This line belongs to Tully. You can cut it if you wish, to make Todd's job easier when editing time comes, but it's not really that big of a deal.
7:44 Missing line: "This is our patient, doctor."
8:00 Two missing lines: "A pity to wake him, don’t you think?" followed by "This is the best sleep he’s had for weeks."
8:09 Missing line: "Oh, don’t wake him, please doctor."
14:07 Missing line: "Excuse me a moment."
15:30 Line is: "It's Mr. Trippett." You left out the 'r' from his name: Tippett (Again, I'll leave this one to Todd for a ruling. You could make a case that this is a different name, or then maybe Pamela just wasn't paying attention and got it wrong. Who could blame her, with all of the shenanigans her husband gets into?)
15:50 Same thing again with Tippett/Trippett
16:05 Tippett again
16:20 Tippett again
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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_pamela_2_128kb.mp3 attempt 2
Sorry for all of the missing lines, it is harder to see ones that do not have her name by it. Thanks
Sorry for all of the missing lines, it is harder to see ones that do not have her name by it. Thanks
Thank you.EmmaHatton wrote: ↑January 6th, 2019, 9:52 am https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_pamela_2_128kb.mp3 attempt 2
Sorry for all of the missing lines, it is harder to see ones that do not have her name by it. Thanks
One thing you can try is going to the "EDIT" tab when you have the script up on your screen. Select the "Find on this page" option, and then enter your character name, as used to label your script lines, in the search box that opens at the bottom of the screen.
You can highlight all the occurrences and even jump from one to the next. (Unfortunately you also see every place that someone else refers to you by name...) Not foolproof, but usually helps.
While this should work here for the Gutenberg.org text script, it does not work for Archive.org scanned image scripts.
Thanks, Todd
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Wonderful, you've got them all this time! Yes, I think each of the ones that you missed were just due to unexpected formatting when Pamela's speech is broken by stage directions. If it makes you feel better, you did correctly record a couple of Pamela's lines the first time around that I missed due to formatting!EmmaHatton wrote: ↑January 6th, 2019, 9:52 am https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_pamela_2_128kb.mp3 attempt 2
Sorry for all of the missing lines, it is harder to see ones that do not have her name by it. Thanks
The new lines that you added in are noticeably louder than the rest. Todd can smooth this out in editing, so no need to worry. But I mention it in case you want to check your settings or something.
Dr Bigland in the MW for PL. Pompous. Very pompous....
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
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Thanks, Todd. But I don't see a listen link for Act 2?
I'll try to get to this today. I was suddenly laid up with a fever yesterday, so it depends on how I'm feeling.
I'll try to get to this today. I was suddenly laid up with a fever yesterday, so it depends on how I'm feeling.
Added the Bigland Act 2 link.
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
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https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_Pamela_3_128k.mp3 act three ready for pl
Aunt Hannah has arrived. And she's suffering, oh, how she is suffering...
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_aunthannah_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/littlebitoffluff_aunthannah_3_128kb.mp3
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