OPEN[PLAY]A Little Bit of Fluff by Walter W. Ellis - thw

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Post by ToddHW » January 9th, 2019, 9:12 am

So sad to hear about your suffering.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by mightyfelix » January 9th, 2019, 9:42 am

Well done, Emma! Pamela's role is complete! Now you just get to kick back and wait for the magic, and the shenanigans, to commence! :thumbs:

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Post by mightyfelix » January 9th, 2019, 9:53 am

Aunt Hannah was very well done! She does indeed suffer!

3:52 Line cut off, then repeated: "I wish to leave this house."

Other than that, everything was perfect. Todd will be able to cut that repeat easily, so I will go ahead and mark this PL ok. :D

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Post by mightyfelix » January 9th, 2019, 10:08 am

I like the dry tone you've given to the doctor. Especially when he starts making veiled jabs at John, this works well! One missing line for act 2:

5:54 Missing Line: "Now, Mrs. Ayers, will you kindly loosen the patient’s things a little—just in front."

Act 3 PL ok as is. :thumbs:

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Post by ToddHW » January 9th, 2019, 2:18 pm

mightyfelix wrote:
January 9th, 2019, 10:08 am
I like the dry tone you've given to the doctor. Especially when he starts making veiled jabs at John, this works well! One missing line for act 2:

5:54 Missing Line: "Now, Mrs. Ayers, will you kindly loosen the patient’s things a little—just in front."

Act 3 PL ok as is. :thumbs:
Thank you - fixed and uploaded again.

Todd

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Post by mightyfelix » January 9th, 2019, 2:41 pm

ToddHW wrote:
January 9th, 2019, 2:18 pm
mightyfelix wrote:
January 9th, 2019, 10:08 am
I like the dry tone you've given to the doctor. Especially when he starts making veiled jabs at John, this works well! One missing line for act 2:

5:54 Missing Line: "Now, Mrs. Ayers, will you kindly loosen the patient’s things a little—just in front."

Act 3 PL ok as is. :thumbs:
Thank you - fixed and uploaded again.

Todd
All better! :D

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