hey Melanie, welcome to the drama forum !!! Already with this short first role I can see you'll fit right in here. I love the voice you're giving the boy. This is a case of "small role - but great character"

You do the most of your lines and this is a cool performance.
Only one short remark on the volume. Act 1 is near our lower limit at barely 86 dB while Act 5 is over 93 ! No need to reupload, as the volumes get tweaked by the editor in drama anyway. But careful in your sections for other projects that are not drama
Both Acts
PL ok. And I agree with Tomas, hopefully this has whetted your appetite for more. See you around !
thanks
Sonia