EDITING [DR] Railway Children, E. Nesbit - dlo

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Elizabby
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Post by Elizabby » May 16th, 2019, 11:49 am

Thanks TJ, that’s great!

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Post by benderca » May 16th, 2019, 3:09 pm

Elizabby wrote:
May 16th, 2019, 11:49 am
Thanks TJ, that’s great!
You're very welcome, Beth. Jasmin was home sick from school today, so I took the opportunity to get her to record the additions and corrections that had been accumulating as I edited... :D

Here's a short one for Mother (Chapter 7):
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_07_mother.mp3

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Post by Elizabby » May 17th, 2019, 7:17 pm

Mother Ch 7 and 13 are PL OK!
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Post by Elizabby » May 17th, 2019, 7:41 pm

benderca wrote:
May 16th, 2019, 6:23 am
Phyllis, Chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_12_phyllis.mp3
There's one line missing from this chapter "Like a mad maniac!"

Chapters 1, 13, 10 and 11 are PL OK. That's just the one extra line and Jasmin is done! :9:


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Post by Elizabby » May 22nd, 2019, 4:21 pm

benderca wrote:
May 22nd, 2019, 3:01 pm
Elizabby wrote:
May 17th, 2019, 7:17 pm
Mother Ch 7 and 13 are PL OK!
Here's Mother, Chapter 9:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_09_mother.mp3

and Mother, Chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_12_mother.mp3
Both of these are PL OK!


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Post by benderca » May 29th, 2019, 5:50 pm

Mother, Chapter 10:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_10_mother.mp3

Note to PL:
There was a color coding mistake in this chapter.

“Bobbie, come here,” said her Mother, and Bobbie came.
“Now,” said Mother, putting her arm round Bobbie and laying her ruffled head against Bobbie’s
shoulder, “try to tell me, dear.”

The second and third of these quotes was color coded as Bobbie's lines. But I read them, so it's all good. Just wanted to give you a heads up when you're listening.

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Post by Elizabby » May 29th, 2019, 6:08 pm

Oops! Sorry about that - I think Bobbie noticed the same thing! I’ll correct the script for the editor!

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Post by axcel » June 3rd, 2019, 3:11 am

perks the porter chapter 9
duration 4:21

10 & 14 this weekend

mark

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_09_perkstheporter.mp3

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Post by Elizabby » June 4th, 2019, 12:40 am

Mother Chapters 10 and 11 are PL OK!


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Post by Elizabby » June 5th, 2019, 12:33 am

axcel wrote:
June 3rd, 2019, 3:11 am
perks the porter chapter 9
duration 4:21

10 & 14 this weekend

mark

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_09_perkstheporter.mp3
Thanks Mark! Perks Chapter 9 is PL OK! :thumbs: I've always thought this was the key to Perks' character overall, so I'm very happy it's turned out so well!

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Post by Elizabby » June 5th, 2019, 11:09 pm

Peter Chapter 9 is uploaded also, and Chapter 9 is now ready to edit! Take it away, Mark!

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Post by bhavya » June 7th, 2019, 1:39 am

Beth,
Does peter chapter 9 need to be pl'ed?

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