COMPLETE [DR] Railway Children, E. Nesbit - dlo

[bhavya]

Everything is fine with chapter 5, except for one edit:

~15:23 - the line is "said Mother. She did, and presently the Doctor helped the stranger to bed."
"She did" is missing, I am not sure whether this has to be added.

Otherwise, it is PL OK.

[Elizabby]

I think that's implied from the context, so let's call it PL OK and keep moving forward!

Thanks so much for all your help with the PLing!

[bhavya]

Hello,

Ch 4-narrator is PL OK.

There are two edits, one for the editor, and the other I am not sure if its needed.

1. 3:55- repeat of "but"
2. ~4:30 - I heard just "rose", instead of 'rose bushes"

Thanks,
Bhavya

[Peter Why]

I'd be happy to edit that; I'll do it shortly.

EDIT: Done - https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_04_narrator.mp3

Peter

[Elizabby]

Thanks Peter! We are getting close to the end now!

[Elizabby]

Perks the Porter is orphaned - male voice claims only please.

[cowguy02]

I can read Albert if you want. However I may not be able to get all the sections done this month.

[Elizabby]

I can read Albert if you want. However I may not be able to get all the sections done this month.

In that case, how about we leave it open for someone to claim who might be able to get it done by the end of the month. If the role is still unclaimed by the end of March you can have it then.

This project is close to finishing and this role is holding up the editing already.

[benderca]

Mother, Chapter 4:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_04_mother.mp3

[benderca]

Here's Mother, Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_08_mother.mp3

Thanks TJ, just one pronunciation correction please. As this book is set in England, I'd like the English pronunciation of the name of the river "Thames" which is "TEMS" (hard "T" please, short vowel, one syllable).

I loved the laughs and sighs - one more sigh where indicated in the text would be even better! That's in the line before she says "time for bed", when she's reflecting that not everyone is always friendly.

Thanks, Beth!

Here's the corrected file:

00:07 Thames -- hopefully correctly pronounced. I followed Cambridge:
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/pronunciation/english/thames

00:30 I added a sigh.

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_08_mother.mp3

[benderca]

Phyllis, Chapter 9:

https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_09_phyllis.mp3

[Elizabby]

Thanks TJ, all of these chapters for both Mother and Phyllis are PL OK!

[bhavya]

There are few edits for chapter 6- narrator:

13:03: repeat of "said Peter"
9:16 : Insert missing line : "And they were almost at the gate"
7:30: Insert "the trees"
4:29: cut the line " It was all very well"

Thanks,
Bhavya

[Peter Why]

I'll get them sorted.

EDIT: Done.

The apparent repeat of "said Peter" at 13:03 was actually due to a missing "said Phyllis": after "breathlessly", there are "said" 's from Peter, Phyllis, Peter, Phyllis, before "Peter repeated."]

Thanks for catching them, bhavya.
Peter

[Elizabby]

Thanks folks! Maybe we will get this one done by the end of March after all!