EDITING [DR] Railway Children, E. Nesbit - dlo

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Post by Elizabby » January 13th, 2019, 1:22 am

HannahMary wrote:
January 12th, 2019, 1:00 pm
Bobbie's lines for chapter 9 = 7:26
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_09_bobbie.mp3
Thanks Hannah! Bobbie is PL OK chapters 7 through 9! She's such a sweet-sounding little girl! :9:


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Post by HannahMary » January 19th, 2019, 2:33 pm

~ Hannah
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Readers needed for:
A Red Wallflower by Susan Warner
The Trial, sequel to The Daisy Chain by Charlotte Mary Yonge

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Post by HannahMary » January 23rd, 2019, 2:01 pm

~ Hannah
Blog: Come, Be Still

Readers needed for:
A Red Wallflower by Susan Warner
The Trial, sequel to The Daisy Chain by Charlotte Mary Yonge

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Post by Elizabby » January 23rd, 2019, 2:57 pm

Brilliant work! Many thanks! With a bit of luck I will PL these tonight!

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Post by GRuss » January 24th, 2019, 8:35 am

Thanks for the positive feedback Elizabby! :)


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Post by Elizabby » January 24th, 2019, 3:21 pm

benderca wrote:
January 24th, 2019, 2:46 pm
Here's Mother, Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_08_mother.mp3
Thanks TJ, just one pronunciation correction please. As this book is set in England, I'd like the English pronunciation of the name of the river "Thames" which is "TEMS" (hard "T" please, short vowel, one syllable).

I loved the laughs and sighs - one more sigh where indicated in the text would be even better! That's in the line before she says "time for bed", when she's reflecting that not everyone is always friendly.

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Post by benderca » January 24th, 2019, 3:48 pm

Elizabby wrote:
January 24th, 2019, 3:21 pm
benderca wrote:
January 24th, 2019, 2:46 pm
Here's Mother, Chapter 8:
https://librivox.org/uploads/dlolso21/railwaychildren_08_mother.mp3
Thanks TJ, just one pronunciation correction please. As this book is set in England, I'd like the English pronunciation of the name of the river "Thames" which is "TEMS" (hard "T" please, short vowel, one syllable).

I loved the laughs and sighs - one more sigh where indicated in the text would be even better! That's in the line before she says "time for bed", when she's reflecting that not everyone is always friendly.
Ha! I actually knew how to say the river Thames once upon a time, though I've never been to England. I was actually contemplating trying an English accent for this part (I've attempted it before here at LV), but I was afraid I couldn't keep it up over so many chapters. My daughter Jasmin can do English as well -- she can do a mean Hermione Granger imitation, but in the end we both decided to go American to get it done quicker... :lol:

I'll make those changes and re-upload.



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Post by bhavya » February 11th, 2019, 9:01 am

Narrator- Ch 1 is PL OK :thumbs:

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Post by bhavya » February 12th, 2019, 4:20 am

Chapter 3 narrator is PL OK :thumbs:

Chapter 2 has two edits, otherwise, its PL OK:

18:41 - 18:43 : The line " Quite poor now" can be cut out, because it is read by Mother
6:11 - 6 :14 : Long pause that is not really required.

Great job in narrating!

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Post by Elizabby » February 12th, 2019, 5:00 am

Thanks bhavya! Pauses and cuts can be fixed in editing, so I'll mark both of these files are PL OK!


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