COMPLETE[PLAY]Trelawny of the Wells by Pinero - thw

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Foon
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Kitty wrote: ↑July 21st, 2018, 6:36 am ok Foon, I listened to Miss Trafalgar :lol: that name ! gets me every time. She is quite, how should I say, adamant that nothing should be "out of place" :mrgreen: You play her very well, excellently characterized with a sort of stiffness that is appropriate. :thumbs:

Act 3 is already PL ok.

In Act 2, there is only one short "Everybody" line missing:

> at about 1:57: please insert: "Yes"

Thanks !

Sonia
Thanks Sonia! :9:

I added the Everybody line at 1:59:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_2_128kb.mp3
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bluechien wrote:EDITED:
"Dear" removed, act 2,
Sonia and my singing knocked together, 4:10, act 1. :)
wonderful job on the merging, Eva :shock: how did you do that ? I tried too and it didn't work at all.

Acts 3 and 4 are also excellently played. Rose sounds so sad for most of the time, but well, she is heartbroken and it seems both her private life and her career have taken a turn for the worse, so this is understandable. Well played !

Acts 1, 2 and 3 are PL ok.

Actually, Act 4 is perfect as well, I would only have a small request:

> at 0:03: “Fancy our being together again, and at the West End!” and “Do you like the play?” – could you please leave a bit more space between those lines for the stage directions ? They are really too near to each other. Let’s make Todd’s job easier :wink:

Thanks for yet another great performance !

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NemoR wrote: ↑July 21st, 2018, 7:19 pmHere is Arthur for Act 4 for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_arthurgower_4_128kb.mp3
awww, Arthur sounds so sweetly innocent and enthusiastic in this act :9: I really liked this performance here, Nemo. The new Arthur is much nicer than the stiffer older version. :lol:

Totally PL ok ! Thanks :)

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SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 21st, 2018, 10:48 pm Mrs. Telfer, Act IV:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawneyofthewells_mrs-telfer-violetsylvester_4_128kb.mp3
Sorry this took so long!
that's fine, Susan, it didn't take too long at all. Anyway, the play is far from being finished.

I liked Mrs Telfer's dignity here, even though one notices she is inwardly seething at the slight that they don't get good roles in Tom's play. Excellently done, Susan ! :thumbs:

I only found one missing line:

> at about 0:50: please insert: “Hush!”

Thanks !

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Foon wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 2:27 am I added the Everybody line at 1:59:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_2_128kb.mp3
oooh, what a short and snippish "yes" that was :lol: Miss Trafalgar is not amused, I see :mrgreen:

Thanks, Foon. This is PL ok now.

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Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:53 am
Foon wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 2:27 am I added the Everybody line at 1:59:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_2_128kb.mp3
oooh, what a short and snippish "yes" that was :lol: Miss Trafalgar is not amused, I see :mrgreen:

Thanks, Foon. This is PL ok now.

Sonia
:D

I tried like 15 different yeses (or whatever the plural would be :lol: ) and when I listened back and heard this one, I immediately knew that one would be hers :mrgreen: I really enjoyed reading her!
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Foon wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 4:21 amI tried like 15 different yeses (or whatever the plural would be :lol: ) and when I listened back and heard this one, I immediately knew that one would be hers :mrgreen:
:thumbs: 15 yesses :lol: that's commitment. I know from experience how silly it starts to sound when you need to repeat the same word over and over again. :mrgreen:

But I agree: THAT yes is totally her. 8-)

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Just checking in to let you know I have all four acts of stage directions recorded. Thats several hours of raw audio to edit. Some parts rawer than others, but all in all, it went fairly smoothly.
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Great.

Thanks, Todd
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Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:48 am
SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 21st, 2018, 10:48 pm Mrs. Telfer, Act IV:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawneyofthewells_mrs-telfer-violetsylvester_4_128kb.mp3
Sorry this took so long!
that's fine, Susan, it didn't take too long at all. Anyway, the play is far from being finished.

I liked Mrs Telfer's dignity here, even though one notices she is inwardly seething at the slight that they don't get good roles in Tom's play. Excellently done, Susan ! :thumbs:

I only found one missing line:

> at about 0:50: please insert: “Hush!”

Thanks !

Sonia
I can do it when I get home from work. I must have somehow lost it when I processed, but I kept a copy of the raw audio (things you learn the hard way...LOL).
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Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:11 am wonderful job on the merging, Eva :shock: how did you do that ? I tried too and it didn't work at all.

It's really easy using tempo, especially here because our singing had the same shape; mine was just slower ... but you can use tempo to put almost any two people together if they say the same words, although you might have to add artificial spaces like you said! You can be quite lazy and use tempo to clean up, that's my lazy habit. :D
Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:11 am Actually, Act 4 is perfect as well, I would only have a small request .... Let’s make Todd’s job easier :wink:
Yeah, that wasn't much space, was it?
Act 4 edited!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_rose_4_128kb.mp3
Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:11 am Thanks for yet another great performance !
Thank you, Sonia :9: Rose had a nice arc, but Tom and Imogen have all the witty dialogue.
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If not, why then, this parting was well made.
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Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:11 am wonderful job on the merging, Eva :shock: how did you do that ? I tried too and it didn't work at all.
It's really easy using tempo, especially here because our singing had the same shape; mine was just slower ... but you can use tempo to put almost any two people together if they say the same words, although you might have to add artificial spaces like you said! You can be quite lazy and use tempo to clean up, that's my lazy habit. :D
Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:11 am Actually, Act 4 is perfect as well, I would only have a small request .... Let’s make Todd’s job easier :wink:
Yeah, that wasn't much space, was it?
Act 4 edited!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_rose_4_128kb.mp3
Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:11 am Thanks for yet another great performance !
Thank you, Sonia :9: Rose had a nice arc, but Tom and Imogen have all the witty dialogue.
Eva D
If we do meet again, why, we shall smile;
If not, why then, this parting was well made.
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bluechien wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 8:34 pm Yeah, that wasn't much space, was it?
Act 4 edited!
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_rose_4_128kb.mp3
yes this is much better, and PL ok now.

Thank you !

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SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 10:54 am
Kitty wrote: ↑July 23rd, 2018, 3:48 am
SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 21st, 2018, 10:48 pm Mrs. Telfer, Act IV:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawneyofthewells_mrs-telfer-violetsylvester_4_128kb.mp3
Sorry this took so long!
that's fine, Susan, it didn't take too long at all. Anyway, the play is far from being finished.

I liked Mrs Telfer's dignity here, even though one notices she is inwardly seething at the slight that they don't get good roles in Tom's play. Excellently done, Susan ! :thumbs:

I only found one missing line:

> at about 0:50: please insert: “Hush!”

Thanks !

Sonia
I can do it when I get home from work. I must have somehow lost it when I processed, but I kept a copy of the raw audio (things you learn the hard way...LOL).
Hope I did this right...
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawneyofthewells_mrs-telfer-violetsylvester_4_128kb.mp3 1.66 KB Clear
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SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 24th, 2018, 1:28 am Hope I did this right...
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawneyofthewells_mrs-telfer-violetsylvester_4_128kb.mp3 1.66 KB Clear
yes. Hush inserted at the correct spot. Totally PL ok now.

Thanks !!!

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