COMPLETE[PLAY]Trelawny of the Wells by Pinero - thw

Post by **Kitty** » July 4th, 2018, 12:06 am

SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 3rd, 2018, 2:43 pmI think I just want to use my real name, Susan Ferman, as my reader name. Assuming I don't get sunk by neighbors with fireworks, I am going to give a shot at recording tonight, while no one else is home.

good luck with the fireworks !

And here is your official reader page: https://librivox.org/reader/12620
here you can see all the projects you participate in and all the sections you have claimed.

You're signed up for Mrs Telfer now. Have fun !

Sonia

SusanFerman · Post by **SusanFerman** » July 4th, 2018, 2:53 pm

Sure enough, I got tanked by neighbors with fireworks (which sounded way too big to be legal)

I ended up with a 50 lb. dog in my lap on and off all night...

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » July 5th, 2018, 11:03 pm

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Post by **Kitty** » July 6th, 2018, 2:13 am

leanneyauyau wrote: ↑July 5th, 2018, 11:03 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_avoniabunn_1_128kb.mp3 1.36 KB Clear
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wonderful performance here, Leanne

I love Avonia's enthusiasm and fierce engagement for her friend in need. And the singing is beautiful too. A very likeable character.

Acts 2 and 3 are already PL ok.

Only one missing "All" line for Act 1, right at the end:

> at 1:20: missing: “Hear, hear!”

great job, thanks, Leanne ! Pity she didn't appear in Act 4 anymore.

Sonia

leanneyauyau · Post by **leanneyauyau** » July 6th, 2018, 3:19 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_avoniabunn_1_128kb.mp3

Post by **Kitty** » July 6th, 2018, 3:27 am

leanneyauyau wrote: ↑July 6th, 2018, 3:19 am https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_avoniabunn_1_128kb.mp3

thanks ! it's PL ok now.

Sonia

SusanFerman · Post by **SusanFerman** » July 10th, 2018, 9:24 pm

I am sorry, I am way behind and have not recorded my part yet. I got delayed, then the weather changed and it is so hot in my studio during the day, I am afraid of frying my equipment. I am going to have to record late at night or early morning, which is a bit of a challenge with my work schedule. I really will get to it this week. My apologies.

Foon · Post by **Foon** » July 16th, 2018, 12:53 pm

Can I read miss Gower?

SusanFerman · Post by **SusanFerman** » July 16th, 2018, 1:27 pm

Hi All!

Here is Mrs. Telfer, Act I. I haven't been able to record Act IV yet, but will give it a shot tonight.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewell_mrs-telfer-violet-sylvester_1_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » July 16th, 2018, 2:59 pm

SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 16th, 2018, 1:27 pm Hi All!

Here is Mrs. Telfer, Act I. I haven't been able to record Act IV yet, but will give it a shot tonight.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewell_mrs-telfer-violet-sylvester_1_128kb.mp3

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » July 16th, 2018, 3:01 pm

Foon wrote: ↑July 16th, 2018, 12:53 pm Can I read miss Gower?

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » July 17th, 2018, 2:03 am

SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 16th, 2018, 1:27 pm Here is Mrs. Telfer, Act I. I haven't been able to record Act IV yet, but will give it a shot tonight.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewell_mrs-telfer-violet-sylvester_1_128kb.mp3

wonderful portrayal, Susan

I love the slightly haughty voice you give Mrs Telfer, excellent. And I had to smirk at the sentence: "Very well, I have played thirteen of 'em."

She loses her lustre for a short second there before she catches herself again

excellent job. I only have two small notes:

> you forgot your voice credit, please say the following at the beginning of your file “Mrs Telfer, Miss Violet Sylvester, read by Susan Ferman”

> at 1:05: "Sitting down to table in my absence! [To Telfer.] How is this, James?" – we need more space for the stage directions here. Also I notice you read the lines twice. Maybe you wanted to delete one of the versions and only keep your favourite ?

or did you want to let Todd choose one of the versions ?

Looking forward to the next act !

Thanks !

Sonia

Foon · Post by **Foon** » July 17th, 2018, 6:47 am

Here are the lines for Miss Trafalgar Gower, Act 2 and Act 3--I found a few lines for her at the end of Act 3 which weren't listed in the MW.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_3_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » July 17th, 2018, 8:38 am

Foon wrote: ↑July 17th, 2018, 6:47 am Here are the lines for Miss Trafalgar Gower, Act 2 and Act 3--I found a few lines for her at the end of Act 3 which weren't listed in the MW.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewells_misstrafalgargower_3_128kb.mp3

Thank you. I added Act 3 to the MW.

Todd

SusanFerman · Post by **SusanFerman** » July 17th, 2018, 10:17 am

Kitty wrote: ↑July 17th, 2018, 2:03 am
SusanFerman wrote: ↑July 16th, 2018, 1:27 pm Here is Mrs. Telfer, Act I. I haven't been able to record Act IV yet, but will give it a shot tonight.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/trelawnyofthewell_mrs-telfer-violet-sylvester_1_128kb.mp3
wonderful portrayal, Susan I love the slightly haughty voice you give Mrs Telfer, excellent. And I had to smirk at the sentence: "Very well, I have played thirteen of 'em." She loses her lustre for a short second there before she catches herself again

excellent job. I only have two small notes:

> you forgot your voice credit, please say the following at the beginning of your file “Mrs Telfer, Miss Violet Sylvester, read by Susan Ferman”

> at 1:05: "Sitting down to table in my absence! [To Telfer.] How is this, James?" – we need more space for the stage directions here. Also I notice you read the lines twice. Maybe you wanted to delete one of the versions and only keep your favourite ? or did you want to let Todd choose one of the versions ?

Looking forward to the next act ! Thanks !

Sonia

Oops-- I actually just plain spaced---I was going to put my voice credit in Act IV, just because James did. I can paste it in, or should I just let you do it?

With respect to the duplicate line, you guessed correctly that it was an accident--but since its recorded that way, may as well let Todd choose. Basically, all three errors are due to editing on two hours sleep.

Working on Act IV now, just having to work around garbage truck picking up a day late. It would have been nice if the town warned us...