FULL[PLAY]Trelawny of the Wells by Pinero - thw

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Post by PeterMusgrove » December 27th, 2018, 1:41 pm

Thanks Sonia :)
Kitty wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 4:58 am
PeterMusgrove wrote:
December 26th, 2018, 1:31 pm
My, I've had a time with this file! I put it down to Christmas Eve drinkies. I have the file that passed Checker, so if you want me to upload it, just let me know!
no unless you did any other changes than these two sentences, it's fine. Amplifiying the file is no big deal and I made a note in the MW.

Thanks

Sonia
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Post by ToddHW » December 28th, 2018, 11:12 am

Act 2 is ready for final PL.

Enjoy!

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Post by Kitty » December 28th, 2018, 12:24 pm

ToddHW wrote:
December 28th, 2018, 11:12 am
Act 2 is ready for final PL.
Enjoy!
oh yes, enjoy I did. What a mayhem at the end, and the beginning sounds really tragic for Rose. The uncomfortable situation is really palpable in all the dialogues. And Todd, you do really carry the scene here as disagreeable Old Gower :thumbs:

I loved it that you didn't merge the voices here but rather let them all speak one after the other. A good choice, sounds more natural.

I would only cut out one narrator line here:

> at 34:54: Avonia. [Laughing merrily.] Yes, ha, ha, ha! - Leanne's fresh merry laugh would sound much better uninterrupted here :)

the rest is perfect !

Sonia

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Post by ToddHW » December 28th, 2018, 1:39 pm

Changed as you suggest.

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Post by Kitty » December 28th, 2018, 1:48 pm

ToddHW wrote:
December 28th, 2018, 1:39 pm
Changed as you suggest.
:thumbs: perfect now. PL ok

Sonia

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