Plays and other dramatic works
oh yes, enjoy I did. What a mayhem at the end, and the beginning sounds really tragic for Rose. The uncomfortable situation is really palpable in all the dialogues. And Todd, you do really carry the scene here as disagreeable Old Gower
I loved it that you didn't merge the voices here but rather let them all speak one after the other. A good choice, sounds more natural.
I would only cut out one narrator line here:
> at 34:54: Avonia. [Laughing merrily.] Yes, ha, ha, ha! - Leanne's fresh merry laugh would sound much better uninterrupted here
the rest is perfect !