Full[PLAY]Every Man In His Humour by Jonson - thw

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Post by Kitty » December 22nd, 2018, 5:50 am

jfgallagher wrote:
December 21st, 2018, 12:14 pm
For the finale...Wellbred, Act V:
oh, he had quite a short part in the final act. But excellently brought to an end :thumbs: All of Wellbred PL ok. Thank you so much !
I like recording 4 lines at a time! :D
well this gives me an opening for shameless advertisment if ever there was one. :lol:

We have one last role unclaimed in The Gay Lord Quex. It's the second gentleman and he has only 4 or 5 lines total as well. So if you like to play a customer at a manicurist's and flirt a bit with the girl who does your nails....please claim here: viewtopic.php?f=27&t=71425 :mrgreen:

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Post by RobMarland » December 24th, 2018, 4:22 am

Rob Marland - formerly Rob Board
I made an Oscar Wilde graphic novel!

Amends for Ladies by Nathan Field. A bawdy Jacobean comedy.
The Doves' Nest and Other Stories by Katherine Mansfield.
● NEXT: A Woman Is a Weathercock by Nathan Field.

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Post by Kitty » December 24th, 2018, 4:38 am

RobMarland wrote:
December 24th, 2018, 4:22 am
Here is my act 3 for spot PL
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_eknowell_3_128kb.mp3
excellent corrections, thank you, Rob. All PL ok now :)

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Post by ZamesCurran » December 25th, 2018, 3:05 pm

Kitty wrote:
October 9th, 2018, 4:41 am
For Act 2, I have two small notes to correct:
Here's the corrected Act II, plus Act III

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_brainworm_2.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_brainworm_3.mp3


Depending how fast I recover for Christmas partying, I hope to have Act 4 and/or 5 tomorrow or this weekend.
Truth,
James
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"A Day Well Spent" - (origin of "Hello Dolly", in One Act 11)

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Post by ToddHW » December 25th, 2018, 7:39 pm

Thank you.

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Post by Kitty » December 26th, 2018, 5:29 am

ZamesCurran wrote:
December 25th, 2018, 3:05 pm
Here's the corrected Act II, plus Act III
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_brainworm_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_brainworm_3.mp3
Depending how fast I recover for Christmas partying, I hope to have Act 4 and/or 5 tomorrow or this weekend.
yay, thank you, James. :9: Both Acts 2 and 3 are PL ok already. You kept up your Brainworm persona quite well in Act 3 as well. :thumbs:

Only one note concerning sound. Many of your initial words are very soft and the sound sometimes fluctuates up and down, louder and softer. :? I wonder if your microphone is somehow voice-activated (I think that is the name). That could be the reason for cutting off the initial syllable. It's not that bad here, I still hear the words, but some could have benefitted a bit from amplification. Maybe check this for the next act, careful that we can hear all the words.

Todd: that means Acts 2 and 3 are ready for final assembly :9:

Thanks

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Post by ToddHW » December 26th, 2018, 8:53 am

Act 2 ready for final PL.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » December 26th, 2018, 10:23 am

ToddHW wrote:
December 26th, 2018, 8:53 am
Act 2 ready for final PL.
wonderfully assembled, Todd. Everybody is absolutely excellent in their roles, be it Kitely's constant whining, or Bobadill's boisterousness, and the final calm deviousness of Brainworm still gives me the shudder. There's not a single character that was boring to listen to. :thumbs:

PL ok, without a doubt.

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Post by ToddHW » December 26th, 2018, 8:02 pm

Act 3 assembled. Not ready for PL yet.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by ToddHW » December 27th, 2018, 7:57 am

Act 3 ready for final PL.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » December 27th, 2018, 9:44 am

ToddHW wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 7:57 am
Act 3 ready for final PL.
wonderfully funny again :lol: I liked the merging of voices too, Todd. :thumbs:

This time I have a small suggestion to correct:

> at 4:20: I know not your name, sir, [to Stephen.] - I think it would be best to put the narrator at the beginning of this sentence (at 4:19)

> at 34:38: "As I am a gentleman! By—" - oops, did TJ and I miss this line or did you forget to paste it in ? :hmm:

The rest all perfect.

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Post by ToddHW » December 27th, 2018, 10:34 am

Kitty wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 9:44 am
ToddHW wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 7:57 am
Act 3 ready for final PL.
wonderfully funny again :lol: I liked the merging of voices too, Todd. :thumbs:

This time I have a small suggestion to correct:

> at 4:20: I know not your name, sir, [to Stephen.] - I think it would be best to put the narrator at the beginning of this sentence (at 4:19)

> at 34:38: "As I am a gentleman! By—" - oops, did TJ and I miss this line or did you forget to paste it in ? :hmm:

The rest all perfect.

Sonia
4:20 change made. I agree with you.

Line is missing from TJ at 34:38. I decided it did not matter.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » December 27th, 2018, 10:47 am

ToddHW wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 10:34 am
Line is missing from TJ at 34:38. I decided it did not matter.
you're right, one swearing more or less does not matter in this act :lol:

PL ok now :)

and now: dinner (well deserved)

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Post by benderca » December 27th, 2018, 12:50 pm

ToddHW wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 10:34 am
Kitty wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 9:44 am
ToddHW wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 7:57 am
Act 3 ready for final PL.
wonderfully funny again :lol: I liked the merging of voices too, Todd. :thumbs:

This time I have a small suggestion to correct:

> at 4:20: I know not your name, sir, [to Stephen.] - I think it would be best to put the narrator at the beginning of this sentence (at 4:19)

> at 34:38: "As I am a gentleman! By—" - oops, did TJ and I miss this line or did you forget to paste it in ? :hmm:

The rest all perfect.

Sonia
4:20 change made. I agree with you.

Line is missing from TJ at 34:38. I decided it did not matter.

Thanks, Todd
I can send you that line if you like. I'm recording right now.

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Post by ToddHW » December 27th, 2018, 1:43 pm

benderca wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 12:50 pm
ToddHW wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 10:34 am
Kitty wrote:
December 27th, 2018, 9:44 am

wonderfully funny again :lol: I liked the merging of voices too, Todd. :thumbs:

This time I have a small suggestion to correct:

> at 4:20: I know not your name, sir, [to Stephen.] - I think it would be best to put the narrator at the beginning of this sentence (at 4:19)

> at 34:38: "As I am a gentleman! By—" - oops, did TJ and I miss this line or did you forget to paste it in ? :hmm:

The rest all perfect.

Sonia
4:20 change made. I agree with you.

Line is missing from TJ at 34:38. I decided it did not matter.

Thanks, Todd
I can send you that line if you like. I'm recording right now.
Sure - that would be the best thing for the completed project.

Thanks, Todd

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