unclejoe wrote: ↑September 18th, 2018, 10:32 pmThe rest of Kitely... uploaded.....
excellent play-acting again, Joe
oh Kitely is really a jealous man, he's got a monomania with cuckold suspicions
I should probably pity the poor man but it's simply too funny. I really enjoyed listening to his whining. You did a great job.
I did find some things to correct this time though:
PL notes for Act 3:
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at 6:48: Scene 3 dialogue with Cob has been put at the beginning of Act 4. Could you
paste to the correct spot in this act please ? Starting with "Ha! how many are there, say'st thou?" and the last line is "Spite of the devil! what do I stay here then? Cob, follow me." Makes it easier for Todd to have them in the correct act.
PL notes for Act 4:
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from 0:01 - 1:51: that's the part that
belongs to Act 3
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at 4:24: "That enters in my
absence to thy mistress" - you say "
presence" which is quite the opposite
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at 6:08: "O, old
incontinent" - you say "
incontent", after that maybe also leave a
bit more space for the stage direction "to Knowell"
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at 7:02: "
Thy wife's their bawd" - I think you say "
their wife"
but I may be mistaken there
PL notes for Act 5:
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at about 0:04: insert missing line: "
I found her there, sir."
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at 0:19: "Know. My son is not married, I hope." -
can be cut out, this should be Knowell speaking about his son. The script is a bit bad in many places.
That's all.
Thanks
Sonia
you applied the qualifier "merry" in your voice credit to the letter. I have rarely heard a player be so cheerful throughout their performance. Excellent job, I highly enjoyed listening to it all. And the ending speech of the play is perfect, it all ends on a cheery note.
very dutiful and endearing somehow. In the end I pitied him a bit.
