COMPLETE[PLAY]Every Man In His Humour by Jonson - thw

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May I read the Servant?
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Foon wrote: July 16th, 2018, 12:47 pm May I read the Servant?
Thank you.

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Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!


Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
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Foon wrote: July 18th, 2018, 1:41 am Here are the few lines for the Servant:
ah I see you are a right dutiful servant. :D Thanks, Foon, these are nicely characterized.

Act 5 is already PL ok.

In Act 1 I found two missing sentences. You missed them because it was a typo "Servo" instead of "Serv.":

> at about 0:12: please insert: “Not I, sir.” and “Why, sir, let this satisfy you; good faith, I had no such intent.

the rest is perfect.

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Kitty wrote: July 18th, 2018, 1:57 am
Foon wrote: July 18th, 2018, 1:41 am Here are the few lines for the Servant:
ah I see you are a right dutiful servant. :D Thanks, Foon, these are nicely characterized.

Act 5 is already PL ok.

In Act 1 I found two missing sentences. You missed them because it was a typo "Servo" instead of "Serv.":

> at about 0:12: please insert: “Not I, sir.” and “Why, sir, let this satisfy you; good faith, I had no such intent.

the rest is perfect.

Sonia
That was fast! :D

I totally missed those--it's too easy to just rely on good ol' ctrl+f :lol:

Now with those two lines:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_servant_1_128kb.mp3
Foon - Real life is getting in the way of LV, will be slow until all is back on track, please bear with me!


Readers needed:
Dramatic Reading: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
Folklore/legends: Arabian Nights Vol. 11
Play: Zeus the Tragedian
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Foon wrote: July 18th, 2018, 2:03 am I totally missed those--it's too easy to just rely on good ol' ctrl+f :lol:
yes that's why I never only rely on the search function, there are simply too many typos still :? With each PL job I browse through the entire text again. After about a dozen roles, I feel like I know some scenes by heart already :lol:

both sentences correctly in now, thanks. PL ok !

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Elizabby wrote: July 19th, 2018, 9:45 pm Here's Dame Kitely!
excellently done, Beth :clap: I love those moments especially when you are rightously outraged and scolding :lol: No missing lines as far as I can see and all perfectly PL ok.

I'll only make a note for Todd that the volume in Act 4 is a bit under 84 db. The other two are fine. No need to reupload.

Thanks !

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Truth,
James
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ZamesCurran wrote: July 22nd, 2018, 6:07 pm The first bit of BrainWorm
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_brainworm_1.mp3
you're a very dutiful personal assistant, James :clap: he sounds very crisp throughout the performance.

only found one small error:

> at 0:46: “No, sir, he saw him not.” – you say “I” instead of “he”

the rest is perfect. Looking forward to the rest ! Thanks

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Act One of Bobadill corrected, and the volume adjusted - plus Acts Two and Three

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_bobadill_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_bobadill_2.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_bobadill_3.mp3

Bobadill has a speech in Act Three in which he lists several herbs. I have no idea if my pronunciation of these is correct. If anyone knows, I'll gladly redo the speech.

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Thank you.

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Hamlet wrote: July 24th, 2018, 10:54 amBobadill has a speech in Act Three in which he lists several herbs. I have no idea if my pronunciation of these is correct. If anyone knows, I'll gladly redo the speech.
no it sounds all good to me :thumbs: But this Bobadill has a knack for huge harangues :shock: :lol: I see you were in your element here, Brad ;)

Acts 1 and 2 are now PL ok.

Act 3 basically is also PL ok, but there is one sentence that could be cut out, as it's not Bobadill speaking:

> at 3:58: "Step. I have a countryman of his here.“ - this is Stephen speaking.
To be sure I went and checked with an original scan: https://archive.org/stream/benjonsonseverym00jonsrich#page/48/mode/1up
It also makes sense by the following dialogue lines.

The rest is totally well acted out :clap:

Thanks

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Here is Mr. Oliver Cob, the wine......err......"water" bearer:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_cob_1_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_cob_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_cob_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_cob_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/everymaninhishumour_cob_5_128kb.mp3

This was fun to perform! Though, silly me, I did not notice all the double entendres in Act 4 until I was editing. Fortunately, I sound like I'm emphasizing the "right" words LOL. :lol:
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Act 3 basically is also PL ok, but there is one sentence that could be cut out, as it's not Bobadill speaking:

> at 3:58: "Step. I have a countryman of his here.“ - this is Stephen speaking.
To be sure I went and checked with an original scan: https://archive.org/stream/benjonsonseverym00jonsrich#page/48/mode/1up
It also makes sense by the following dialogue lines.

Oops! I guess I was careless there!

Brad
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