[COMPLETE][DR]Dave Brings Home A Wife, by Steele Rudd-kit

Post by **Kitty** » May 3rd, 2018, 12:19 pm

Here's Mrs White.

Hell hath no fury like a mother scorned, as the saying goes

I gave it my all, Chris, I hope that is what you had in mind. Dad Rudd better go into hiding. I think there was never a mother so enraged since Grendel's mom.

1) preparing the battlefield:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lilysmom_13_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 3:17 min.

2) open warfare:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lilysmom_14_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 5:02 min.

3) a truce:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lilysmom_17_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:09 min.

now I'm looking forward to hearing your part of the fight

You were right, I enjoyed the role immensely.

Sonia

SonOfTheExiles · Post by **SonOfTheExiles** » May 3rd, 2018, 2:00 pm

I’ll hook my phone up to the truck’s sound system so I can get an initial listen to it travelling north up the coast in an hour’s time.

And I’ll PL it early tomorrow morning. The kookaburras and magpies outside will give the room just the right mood.

I reckon Lily’s Mother will probably feature in our LV theatrical trailer.

“This is eucalyptus ... the most powerful stick in the world. So, you gotta ask yourself a question: “Do I feel lucky?” Well, do you, Dad?”

Cheers,
Chris

SonOfTheExiles · Post by **SonOfTheExiles** » May 4th, 2018, 9:13 pm

Kitty wrote: ↑May 3rd, 2018, 12:19 pm Here's Mrs White. Hell hath no fury like a mother scorned, as the saying goes I gave it my all, Chris, I hope that is what you had in mind. Dad Rudd better go into hiding. I think there was never a mother so enraged since Grendel's mom.

1) preparing the battlefield:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lilysmom_13_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 3:17 min.

2) open warfare:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lilysmom_14_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 5:02 min.

3) a truce:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lilysmom_17_128kb.mp3
Recording time: 1:09 min.

now I'm looking forward to hearing your part of the fight You were right, I enjoyed the role immensely.

Sonia

Word perfect, and superbly acted!

There's a future for you in assertiveness training and salary package negotiation, I reckon, Sonia.

Cheers,
Chris

Post by **Kitty** » May 5th, 2018, 1:08 am

SonOfTheExiles wrote: ↑May 4th, 2018, 9:13 pm There's a future for you in assertiveness training and salary package negotiation, I reckon, Sonia.

I was thinking more along the lines of lion-tamers in the circus

Thanks, Chris, and I'm happy you liked it.

Sonia

Elizabby · Post by **Elizabby** » May 5th, 2018, 9:40 pm

Registering my presence, and subscribing to the thread!

SonOfTheExiles · Post by **SonOfTheExiles** » May 5th, 2018, 11:08 pm

Welcome aboard, Beth!

"Registering my presence, and subscribing to the thread!"
I am so stealing this sentence! It has a touch of class that you just don't get when you "throw your hat in the ring", as is my want.

Cheers,
Chris

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 7th, 2018, 12:10 pm

Lily's part is all recorded. I'll begin editing sometime soon.

catharmaiden · Post by **catharmaiden** » May 10th, 2018, 1:26 pm

I would like to claim Mrs Walker's one sentence. I'll make the most of it.

Sandra

SonOfTheExiles · Post by **SonOfTheExiles** » May 10th, 2018, 4:41 pm

Welcome Sandra.

I’ll sign you up.

And looking forward to hearing Lily, Devorah.

Chris

Post by **mightyfelix** » May 10th, 2018, 10:05 pm

And here she is! Let me know if you think I've played her too timid. I didn't read much of the story, beyond the parts immediately surrounding my lines.

https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lily_10.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lily_11.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lily_12.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lily_13.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lily_14.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/davebringshomeawife_lily_17.mp3

SonOfTheExiles · Post by **SonOfTheExiles** » May 11th, 2018, 4:23 am

I had a listen, Devorah, and Lily sounds perfectly characterised.

Cheers,
Chris

Post by **Kitty** » May 11th, 2018, 4:25 am

SonOfTheExiles wrote: ↑May 11th, 2018, 4:23 am I had a listen, Devorah, and Lily sounds perfectly characterised.

wait ! did you PL this now Chris ? Sorry for being behind in my job here

Sonia

SonOfTheExiles · Post by **SonOfTheExiles** » May 11th, 2018, 4:31 am

No, I just moved the sections into the MW, and had a listen to the voice characterisation. I haven't PLed it.

Since Lily knew her Mum would be PLing her, I suspect she maintained correct posture throughout, and probably dusted and vacuumed the recording studio first.

Chris

Post by **Kitty** » May 11th, 2018, 4:35 am

SonOfTheExiles wrote: ↑May 11th, 2018, 4:31 am No, I just moved the sections into the MW, and had a listen to the voice characterisation. I haven't PLed it.

Since Lily knew her Mum would be PLing her, I suspect she maintained correct posture throughout, and probably dusted and vacuumed the recording studio first.

I'll get to it soon. Lily better make her mom proud.

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » May 11th, 2018, 4:54 am

mightyfelix wrote: ↑May 10th, 2018, 10:05 pm And here she is! Let me know if you think I've played her too timid. I didn't read much of the story, beyond the parts immediately surrounding my lines.

Lily is a perfect dear

yes she is a bit timid, but that's to be expected with such an overbearing mother

and now considering she is in constant dread of old Rudd, she is holding up just fine.

All lines are in, as far as I can see and they're all perfect. Only thing I would have to note is the volume which is between 80 and 85 dB, none of them reaches up to the desired minimum. You were being a bit too timid in that respect

But Chris will adjust the volume anyway, during assembly, so it's ok. I'll mark them all PL ok.

Chris, only one question concerning voice credit: do you want the entire description you mentioned in the colour-coded google doc ? If so, Devorah, you would have to read: “Lily White, wife to Dave". But let's wait for Chris to answer first.

Sonia