Thanks Mark! This is PL OK! I love the expression and character you've given the Doctor!
The only comment I would make is to please be careful to leave space for editing between the lines, at least 2 seconds. Some of these are very close together, which makes it hard for our editor. Remember your lines need to be taken out of your file and pasted into the master narration file, so even if the words between are only "he said" you still need to leave a full 2 seconds please.
I look forward to Section 2! (BTW you don't need to put the 128kb on the end of your files - that's only for the final version.)