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Post by ToddHW » January 9th, 2019, 2:51 pm

I assume this means that sections 72 and 73 can be marked PL OK in the MW?

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Post by ChuckW » January 9th, 2019, 4:01 pm

ToddHW wrote:
January 9th, 2019, 2:51 pm
I assume this means that sections 72 and 73 can be marked PL OK in the MW?

Thanks, Todd
Yes, it’s all finished.
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Post by Availle » January 12th, 2019, 7:37 pm

Here's the narrator for "A Day Well Spent", some 16 minutes long. No noisecleaning.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/adaywellspent_narrator_128kb.mp3

No wonder this is not going anywhere, half of the time people are talking "aside". :roll:
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Post by ToddHW » January 17th, 2019, 6:00 am

I have edited and uploaded Efficiency for Philip. Anyone want to PL it?

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Post by Kitty » January 17th, 2019, 6:53 am

ToddHW wrote:
January 17th, 2019, 6:00 am
I have edited and uploaded Efficiency for Philip. Anyone want to PL it?
I'll check it out, Todd. I would be happy though if someone else PLed Chuck's play "Bridges" because techically that one is not PD for me as European. So in this case, I hope some other kind soul would help.

Sonia

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Post by Kitty » January 17th, 2019, 7:35 am

wonderful, Efficiency really sounds awesome. The metallic voice really was a great and creepy effect for this play. Excellent play-acting by all 4 readers. :thumbs:

I have two small notes, but both are probably optional:

> at 7:42: (p. 21) the emperor here says twice “Bring him in”, did you maybe have it twice in your file and you cut one out by mistake because you thought it was a repeat ? :hmm: if so, you could paste it back in to be totally consistent with the text, but it doesn't really change the meaning

> at 30:09: “End of Efficiency” – I notice the names of the authors are missing. One could easily paste them in from the intro if it's important to have them at the end too.

Other than that, it's totally PL ok.

Sonia

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Post by ToddHW » January 17th, 2019, 7:50 am

Kitty wrote:
January 17th, 2019, 7:35 am
wonderful, Efficiency really sounds awesome. The metallic voice really was a great and creepy effect for this play. Excellent play-acting by all 4 readers. :thumbs:

I have two small notes, but both are probably optional:

> at 7:42: (p. 21) the emperor here says twice “Bring him in”, did you maybe have it twice in your file and you cut one out by mistake because you thought it was a repeat ? :hmm: if so, you could paste it back in to be totally consistent with the text, but it doesn't really change the meaning

> at 30:09: “End of Efficiency” – I notice the names of the authors are missing. One could easily paste them in from the intro if it's important to have them at the end too.

Other than that, it's totally PL ok.

Sonia
Fixes made as you suggest - Chuck only gave me one "Bring him in" so I just repeated it now.

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Post by ChuckW » January 17th, 2019, 9:32 am

ToddHW wrote:
January 17th, 2019, 7:50 am
Kitty wrote:
January 17th, 2019, 7:35 am
wonderful, Efficiency really sounds awesome. The metallic voice really was a great and creepy effect for this play. Excellent play-acting by all 4 readers. :thumbs:

I have two small notes, but both are probably optional:

> at 7:42: (p. 21) the emperor here says twice “Bring him in”, did you maybe have it twice in your file and you cut one out by mistake because you thought it was a repeat ? :hmm: if so, you could paste it back in to be totally consistent with the text, but it doesn't really change the meaning

> at 30:09: “End of Efficiency” – I notice the names of the authors are missing. One could easily paste them in from the intro if it's important to have them at the end too.

Other than that, it's totally PL ok.

Sonia
Fixes made as you suggest - Chuck only gave me one "Bring him in" so I just repeated it now.

Thanks, Todd
I can re-record the line, if you want.
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Post by ToddHW » January 17th, 2019, 9:37 am

Chuck,

No need to rerecord - repeating your line does what is necessary and sounds fine.

You make a good Emperor. Sorry about the whole death thing at the end of the play....

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Post by Kitty » January 17th, 2019, 10:05 am

ToddHW wrote:
January 17th, 2019, 7:50 am
Fixes made as you suggest - Chuck only gave me one "Bring him in" so I just repeated it now.
ah ok...well it doesn't even sound strange to have twice the same sentence :lol: I feared it might, but it's good. PL ok now. Yay, another one finished.

Sonia

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Post by benderca » Yesterday, 4:39 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
October 30th, 2018, 12:53 pm
Thank you, TJ! A lovely performance, but unfortunately you missed one line, which can be inserted at about the 3:57 mark:

“I am entirely at your service.”

Once that's in, I can start editing this together! :)
Sorry to keep you waiting, Tomas. Here's my part with the missing line. I don't know if you've already started to assemble, but I redid the two lines before the missing line as well. I thought Frau Lindemann should be less cool and more flustered when the princess actually arrives. I hope that's not too much trouble for you.

3:47 At your command, your Highness. (REDID)
3:53 Here—at the head of the stairs—my lady. (REDID)
4:01 I am entirely at your service. (ADDED)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/farawayprincess_fraulindemann_sudermann.mp3

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Post by Kitty » Yesterday, 6:09 am

benderca wrote:
Yesterday, 4:39 am
Sorry to keep you waiting, Tomas. Here's my part with the missing line.
cool, thank you, TJ. That means another play will be ready soon :9:

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Post by WiltedScribe » Yesterday, 9:13 am

Thank you, TJ! The new lines sound great, so we can mark Frau Lindemann PL OK.

Have not gotten far into assembling, so this won't be ready for a bit. Since a few other plays are still being collated, I won't rush it right now.
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Post by Kitty » Yesterday, 9:31 am

WiltedScribe wrote:
Yesterday, 9:13 am
Thank you, TJ! The new lines sound great, so we can mark Frau Lindemann PL OK.

Have not gotten far into assembling, so this won't be ready for a bit. Since a few other plays are still being collated, I won't rush it right now.
ok I change the MW, Tomas. Thanks ! Looking forward to this play

Sonia

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